The chapter was pretty good, however I do believe there is a problem with the number of "spectators". It's a problem I find in a lot of "viewing"(?) stories, but you have just too many different, colorful characters and a lot of them are just... easily forgotten? I mean, I understand that you couldn't just make everyone react everytime (plus 30 characters, I sweat just thinking about it) but a lot of them become redundent.

Also, you only have heroes or heroes-in-training or saved by/close to Izuku, which is understandable but as such lose a point other "viewing" stories have: different points of views on morals. They are all basically on the same page, horified by the same thing, happy for the same thing (albeit Ibara showed some resistance to her view of gods being... mistreated. And that was really nice to see).

Lasly, the fact that every professional heroes are horified and shocked about how bad people can get, like accepting slavery. They are always shocked about it in their line of work? No one has a more jaded vuew on humanity and a hero's duty?

I do enjoy the story, though, which is why I offer this hopefully constructive criticism. I'll keep an eye out for future updates to it

When you good to update?

More or less, just been working on other things. I also have been trying to figure out how to tackle Hero's Promise.

Oh and I've been put into therapy to help my mental health.

However, I will post the first and second chapters of the reaction story to Naruto the Inheritor by the end of July. Then I want to work on my rewrite of The World is Entertainment. I will also try to get Hero's Promise done early August but no promises.

I guess that pretty much covers everything.

Hey, you still alive?

Hey so uh, did something happen? I thought you would have posted a chapter by now.

I hope you make more of the react fanfic and inko see megimin has her futur daughter-in-law.

Hm. Inko might have that reaction, but I doubt it'd be out loud like that in front of children.

What an arbitrary choice of first, last and hero names in the introduction, with only Mei getting her full name, haha.

Oh shit run awaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy! Mama cinimini will kill us all! Do moreヾ(**)ﾉ

To InfernoKnightmare:

Plagiarism? Your right, that’s what it would be if I put a work that was a complete copy of this author. So all I have to do is change the words a bit and done.

And you did read that from wherever the author leaves off in the story I would continue with my own chapters and as such making my own works unless your saying that I can see the future and type up what the author would have made word for word. If so then I’m sorry to say that that skill is beyond my reach but thank you for thinking that highly of me.

Now as for whether I have or don’t have those author’s permission, let me ask you this, do they have Kohei Horikoshi’s permission to used his work as their own. Did they contact Horikoshi and ask him personally for permission to use his work.

Don’t be a hypocrite.

This site is made up of works from authors who commit plagiarism against other people without their consent and still have the gull to complain to other people for doing the exact same thing.

Whether it’s the world, the setting, or it’s characters, just by using someone else’s creation, your already plagiarism.

You are right, you don't owe us anything however why did you made a chapter that was just a test? Was that to see people's reaction to no new content or were you having issues uploading the actual chapter 6?

Now to the review of chapter 5. I really liked it and cannot wait for everyone's reaction to the events to come. Also, mama Midoriya unleashing the beast will be entertaining to read.

You know mineta is technically a shota (male loli). That was such a missed opportunity.

Gone, Reduced to atoms. The test had been completed.

Where is new chapter?

Oi