| Reviews for In The Pride |
|---|
JustAFemaleGeek chapter 9 . 7/8 That's great. I'm glad that it won't be abandoned. It gives me hope. Stay safe. 3 |
JustAFemaleGeek chapter 8 . 7/8 Welp. The first parts were werid, but now we've gotten to the good stuff. Deifnitely very creative story, I haven't found anything that starts off in the same way as this one. I would love to see more. :) |
erica.phoenix16 chapter 8 . 6/5 I like this story! Keep it up and I'll eagerly await your next chapter no matter how long it takes. :) |
Pierre chapter 9 . 5/9 No problems take your Time i understand |
Wolf heart 22 chapter 9 . 5/10 Same to you. |
Pierre chapter 8 . 4/26 Nice chapter hope another chapter soon |
Husker97 chapter 8 . 4/26 Loved this chapter. Are we going to do a love story between Jason and the lioness with the blue eyes? |
aw4977273 chapter 8 . 4/26 Interesting...I wonder how everyone else is going to react to seeing Jason. |
Interstate2011 chapter 8 . 4/25 I noticed the Pocahontas reference. Anyway, you missed some quotation marks: "For all I know," Jason continued, "you just want me to come back..." The comma after "continued" and the starting of the next part of the quote with a lowercase letter would have meant that Jason's sentence wasn't finished. Oh, and quotes that are inside other quotes start with single quotation marks or apostrophes. Anyway, pretty whimsical part so far. |
Jason Chandler chapter 8 . 4/25 Finally, Jason has met Mufasa and the Pridelanders. I wonder what's in store for them? (: |
Wolf heart 22 chapter 8 . 4/25 Nice introduction of Mufasa and sabari. And Zira is here too?! Oh boy! I like where this is going. Update soon. |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/23 Please update soon this story is getting juicy |
Pierre chapter 7 . 4/21 luna prime tel me are you french ? because je suis français aussi |
Pierre chapter 7 . 4/20 nice chapter like all the other |
Matt chapter 7 . 4/19 Loved the kissing part! So funny! |