Reviews for Lorelei
ClemPrime13 chapter 1 . 5/25
That cliffhanger is painful, and I need more!
BLADE OF ILLUSIONS chapter 1 . 4/6
I really liked this one, it feels like an prologue or preview to a ful story though
Nnox Inkuree chapter 1 . 3/26
That was just as unsettling as The Apathy, I got goosebumps man.
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 1 . 3/25
- Show
If it had the time for a Monster of the Week episode than this would be a perfect example of how to do it.

- Inspiration
Was it just me or are there trace elements of Friday the 13th in this chapter as well?

"Haunted" camp near a lake, masked villain that seemingly can't die.
sdphantom10 chapter 1 . 3/24
Back to the depths wid ye!
Haha naw seriously though thats an unsettling image you painted
Press-START360 chapter 1 . 3/24
Ah so it’s a creature like a siren, nice