This is great! Keep up the good work!

This is so good! Natsu's dragon is so adorable with Lucy. Can't wait for the next update!

Can't wait for the next update! Love it :)

I really like this story and I don't mind the fillers at all. I think it's great that you're building context and relationships instead of just diving straight into the climax. It was a wonderful story as usual, and good luck writing the next one!

damn that was a long one! i rly liked it as it showed the characters a bit more detailed but idk...u somehow just cut off the last chapter and didnt make it influence this one? if i managed to convey it somehow x.x. it doesnt make this chap worse but it feels like some kind of transition to the happenings of this one is missing x.x

this chapter was cute! I liked the acknowledgement of Lucy potentially freezing in the weirdly cold castle. the max stuff was cute too (does eggan really exist in canon?)! was natsu's roar about him being jealous? that was my guess. it would extra make sense if he's like reverted to his dragon state or whatever it is that happened to him.
... which got me thinking. Lucy isn't as attracted to Natsu as he seems to be to her (right? am I miss reading that?)... is he gonna try wooing her or whatever to make sure she doesn't decide to go galavanting off with some other guy? I mean, how weird would it be for the prince's mate to be like "hey wanna go on a date?" to some random dude?
I'm proud of Lucy taking all the weirdness in stride and not just breaking down over and over again like I think I might if thrust into a world that doesn't make any sense and is completely unfamiliar... though then i suppose more time has passed than we've actually seen huh? So maybe she's had more time to get used to it.
thanks for sharing with us!

AWESOME CHAPTER! Poor Natsu. Trying to help, but not using all his brain cells sometimes... ;-)

So cute when Lucy meets Asuka! And we meet Levy too! I take Eggan is your character? Smart mouth! ;-)

Lucy's friends' should have warned Lucy amount Natsu's dragon form. No wonder the girl was scared to death!

Anyway, again GREAT chapter! Please keep on writing and update A.S.A.P please!

Stay awesome, well and safe!

Cool chapter. Hopefully Lucy will get used to Natsu in his dragon form.

Love it! cannot wait for the next one !

i Think u perfectly nailed Natsus character in this chap! extremly protective of those dear to him and competitive af when it comes to fighting ;D! it was so obv that Erza would wreck him but he did put up a good fight ! Im so curious about Natsus relationship with Zeref and if hes part demon in this fic or only half dragon? cause u did describe his flames as red and black sooooo it could be a hint of his demonic relations! AHHH SO MANY QUESTIONS!

Your welcome. Awesome chapter, so Zeref is the antagonist of this story, looks like Natsu gas a history with him. I wonder how Lucy knows battle tactics

this was a lot of fun! I loved that Lucy blew off Natsu and just gave him advice instead of the praise he wanted. I'm curious about why they all seemed to take Natsu's challenge to Erza so seriously. I get that saying he was better than her was insulting but was there more to it? like, if he beat her, would he become the new head general or something? it was also neat to see that Natsu had black flames as well; I wonder what his connection to Zeref is in this story had something to do with that...
as always, thanks so much for sharing your work with us!

Oh goody! Another wonderful update! This made my day!

I'm so glad Juvia has warmed up to Lucy and that Lucy is intrigued by her homeland!

Awesome battle scene, after the typical spat between Natsu and Gray. LOL! I wonder how Lucy knows the art of self defense? Did she take fencing or martial arts etc.?

And what the relationship between Zeref and Natsu in this version?

Please update very soon! Fantastic writing! :-D

This is awesome! The wait was worth it. It went from 0 to 100 real quick :D Can't wait to see what happens next!

ahhh its fine its fine! its a good character development u know? at first he fails by being way too pushy but learned and improved and got his girl x3 u might only have to change slight stuff when u edit it someday :D! and regarding this chap: the beginning in which Natsu came to wake Lucy up was soooo adorable! they already acted like friends . its such a nice improvement. but i rly am curious what all that stuff concerning the book in the archive meant! o: it seems that Lucy is someone incredibly special! i also wonder if she absorbed the books energy? im happy af that ure gonna update regularly again cause this cliffhanger is killing me! xD