Will he meet jimmy hudson?

Awesome chapter man keep up the awesomeness and update again soon as possible thanks.

Pink Hulk? I didn’t know there was one. Oh this was good by the way. Only problem was I didn’t know who some of the characters were since most of my marvel knowledge comes from Marvel movies and LEGO Marvel games. But I am coming back to Fma because I know the lore well and I know what works and it’s easier for me to make a Fma oc than a Naruto Oc. So yea, Fma is back! With that being said, Ciao!

The plot base is good but the spelling is so bad I can't read it

Learn to spell. Your errors are distracting. Download a spell checker like Grammarly and use it. It will make your writing better.

Add more chapters please

Interesting.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.