hey asshole when are you going to update rogues of the force chapter 2 already after naruto and his twilight rogues army of mandalorian and any species who wish to join him and his army allied themselves with the republic after naruto rejected the offer of becoming a jedi padawan for the jedi order despite the fact he a force user and will as well
i want to know what happen next when naruto and darth talon went to christopsis with aayla to help anakin obiwan and their forces trap there and under attack by the separatist forces station their

Awesome chapter keep it up

i suggest you reread as there is one section that doesn't make sense. The section " My name is Dalton and I must ask, is it true he killed Dalton?" Dalton asked will.
Otherwise great chapter

Love the story. Can't wait to read more. Hey, have you thought of doing a Naruto/Danny Phantom crossover? I think it would be interesting to have Naruto and Will to he half ghosts that can still use chakra and magic. Perhaps have Danny die in the portal accident or never get powers to begin with. Although, I would still like the female clone Dani to be created and end up with Naruto. Or perhaps have the female clone Dani be the original and have the orginal male Danny later be the clone that Vlad Plasmius makes.

Great story continue as soon as possible please looking forward to seeing what happens next

Awesome chapter and

Good chapter, and really liking the idea of Usopp and Nojiko having Devil Fruit powers that suit them perfectly. Looking forward to when you do the next chapter

Can you make the lemons longer

What the crew name

I like this chapter, continue please.

Hmm, seems Naruto is a ladies magnet anyways keep up the great work!

Sweet, you even have Vivi interested in Naruto. you know, not many Fanfics have her going with the straw hats unless something threatens her people (like in 'Luffy's Renewed Adventures', she went with them because Luffy revealed that in the future Akainu decimated her kingdom just for being their ally,) or she's forced to, like the World Government knowing that she was part of Crocodile's organization and they want to arrest her to use as a hostage to keep her father in line. you can use that scenario for making her go with them, or use your imagination. But if she does go with them, give her the Suna-Suna no mi (she accidentally ate this one in 'Nine Minutes' by serpentguy, and she grew quite potent with its abilities) and with Naruto's seals, he can create a satchel for her to carry sand in and teach her so of Gaara's moves. Also with Ussop's new Explosion abilities; he can't just be a sniper, he can be a demolition expert like Deidara. By mixing his blood or spit in with clay and animating it with his chakra (when he learns it), he could create Deidara's bomb sculptures or with his inventions (and with Frankie's help when he comes on), grapeshoot for his guns, slingshot, or the cannons and even make grenades. The possibilities for his Bomb-Bomb no mi are endless with his creative mind and you have the power to make them to life. As for Nami, I would hold off on her getting one; I think she would make good use of Caesar Clown's Gas-Gas fruit for making tear gas for a quick getaway (or other gases, I swear if Caesar Clown's power over gas wasn't like Gutrot from Ben 10, I don't know what is). can't wait to see what you do with Enel, I've always hated that sociopath for he's #5 in my list of One Piece villains who deserve to die; #1 is Akainu (Was Sengoku drunk when he promoted this sociopath to an Admiral or was it those senile Five Elders), #2 is Blackbeard (kind of obvious with the s&t he's pulled), #3 is Dilflamgo (guy's a psycho/sociopath depending on his mood and he's manipulative even to his crew mates {they are so loyal that they don't even realize that their captain is using them and he wouldn't care if one dies as long as they were useful to him}), #4 is Charlotte Linlin or Big mom ( she's a manipulative woman-child one throws a temper-tantrum when she does get what she wants, being her sweets or an alliance; she's powerful enough to become an Emperor, but that's only because of her Soul-Soul fruit and her children). Speaking of Big Mom's kids, you could have it where Pudding ran off with Lola for if she was so close to Lola in canon and feared her mother, why didn't she take the chance to go with her elder sister (I get that maybe she didn't know, but I doubt it.) Heck, I wouldn't be surprised if Naruto and his crew-mates completely level Enies Lobby to the ground as well as beat Cipher Pol 9 to a bloody mess and within an inch of their lives, Rob Lucci vs Naruto will very interesting; Six paths vs Rokushiki, who will come out on top?

There where some mistakes here and there but besides that great chapter.

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You added in Alvida? Wow i don't think ANYONE'S done that before also maybe you should consider getting them a Bigger Ship Earlier since Naruto already has WAY more then Luffy did by this time