interesting take. now I want to know what happens next

Really beautifully blended scripting. Love this plot line too.

This is an absolutely exquisite and unique retelling of Crowley’s and Aziraphale’s journey from the beginning together. I am truly looking forward to your next chapter in this marvelous tail. Thank you for writing this!

Very much enjoying this one

I like the idea of Aziraphale being created after the War.
I like Aziraphale's forms.
I like Aziraphale's impression of the three Archangles.
I adore Aziraphale's interactions with humans.
I love that Adam abd Eve were the ones that introduced food to Aziraphale.
I adore Aziraphale's first impression of Crawley.
"If anything, Aziraphale told himself that he should be smiting the demon, not becoming smitten with him." 3
I adore the kiss.
"Gabriel...oh dear, please keep in mind this is the polite version, but God would very much like to know what in the...flying fuck? Yes, what in the flying fuck are you doing?" Metatron told them, looking very distressed about it. "She's very busy with parallel worlds at the moment, so what are you going on about? Why are all the Choirs here instead of doing their jobs? Why is there a courtroom in Heaven?! Only I, the Almighty, can pass judgment so why is there a fucking courtroom?! And seriously, are those thrones?!" It makes me curious what the impolite version looked like.
" Someone was about to be embarrassed, and Aziraphale was fairly confident that it wasn't going to be him." He's right. Unfortunately, the Archangels really don't see it.
Poor Metatron...
"Crawley had two different versions of itself that he could admire." XD
"Alright, they're remarkably horse shaped with an additional problem attached to their forehead." I love thus description.
I adore that saving the children was Aziraphale's idea.
I love their time on the Ark. How open Aziraphale was about his feelings and how much Crawley already cares, trying to save this idiotic angel from himself.
" Aziraphale knew that his love didn't have an expiration date. He could be patient for Crawley until the demon was ready to believe him. Aziraphale had thought about it a lot in the last thousand years since last they met. He could wait another thousand or more if need be." They have all the time in the world after all.
I love how this chapyer ended.