Reviews for Companionship and Clarity
AxeTheGreat chapter 4 . 7/3
Nice
Faoiltiarn chapter 1 . 6/4
please can you update?
Bearmauls chapter 3 . 5/25
This is surprisingly entertaining. I do think you'll need to go into more detail at some point about Riddle's descent into evil madness, as her story to Harry has glossed over a lot of stuff.

Riddle could also do a LOT of things to get Harry more on-board with the plan. Revealing Wormtail's body to get Sirius official freedom. Helping to heal Harry from the years of malnourished treatment, etc. Will be curious to see how she goes about getting him more aligned to her plans.
NeverGonnaStop chapter 4 . 5/8
Well it's certainly not the usual kind of story I like. I have read and really enjoyed a few great fem Riddle stories, and I can see you took some inspiration from at least one of them, but you have a big problem with show don't tell as well as pacing, but the story itself is good. I'll be sticking around.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/8
Cute
ACI100 chapter 1 . 5/7
The contents of the chapter are solid.
You could really use a beta though, or more thorough proofreading on your part.

Aside from that, it has potential and I confess, I have a soft spot for stories that alter the prophecy.
TendraelUmbra chapter 4 . 5/7
I wasn't sure what to expect when I was starting this fic, but you're actually pulling it off fairly well. Harry's reaction to the situation is realistic and well-written. I hope to see more updates soon!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/27
Plz updaye soon
Barny123 chapter 4 . 4/15
I am realy enyoing your fic so far, it's an old Idear with a new conzept. Personally your Harry is quite good, alexa is a bit too easy going for my taste, but that's personal preferences.
Harrys past Would be a great key to form a bond between them.
Looking forward the next chapter
Have a nice one
Barny
NarutoCloud chapter 4 . 4/14
Very interesting story I love the twist to it and hope to see more chapters soon!
magitech chapter 4 . 4/13
Harry is being far too much like the great coward Dumbledore.
Oh the thieving, torturing, raping, mutilating, mass murdering terrorist Death eaters are suffering a bit of pain. NOOO! don't hurt them. Sorta pathetic when you realize just what filth they are.
They turned on their own society just for personal power and the fun of hurting people.
Harry really needs to grow up and take off his Dumbledore approved morals, or is that mind control.

Maybe Alexa should appeal to Harry's teenage hormones and let him see her naked.
By accident of course :) Get him used to the fact she's a girl.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/13
It is perfect
Sparks18 chapter 4 . 4/13
it is brilliant. I like how their relationship is progressing. how they have realistic issues. and most importantly you show how badly Harry deals with emotions.
Sparks18 chapter 4 . 4/13
this is one of my current favourites and I wait for an update. stay safe!
great story
Guest chapter 3 . 4/10
Cute start, plz dont abandon us ;-;
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