Reviews for Smaller, More Honest Souls:DAWNOVERDUSK
Chretner chapter 5 . 7/25
Hello again. Good to see you're upload.

I admit, I forget that the Masters are supposed to be the protectors of all the worlds. It makes too. much sense that they wouldn't make finding two kids a priority. Another world that I'm experiencing for the first time through this story. I'm excited to see what paths you'll lead us down this time. Also, love Oscar's Keyblade. What I'm imagining looks awesome.

As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
Chretner
Gamelover41592 chapter 5 . 7/22
excellent work on this chapter and man lots of deep stuff but question: what made you decide to do fullmetal alchemist
Chretner chapter 4 . 5/17
Hello again.

As always, you've more than matched my expectations for your awesome stories and storytelling. Every time I read a chapter, I fall a little bit more in love with the world that you build.

I honestly didn't expect Grimm to appear off of Remnant though. A good twist that makes sense when you think about it. I also thought that Dove would have gone with Dawn and Oscar on this trip, but again, I guess it makes sense. As a master, she has other duties now that Grimm have showed up.

I've never seen any of the Worlds that we're going to, with the exception of Treasure Planet, but I think I got a good grasp on what these characters are like by the way you've shiwn them.

As always, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Chretner.
Gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 5/15
excellent work on this chapter and great bonding moments and fight scenes
Chretner chapter 3 . 5/10
Hello there! It's great to see you again!

A bit late to this story, I'm afraid... I forgot to check your stories for when it showed up. Still, good to see this already going strong.
In all honesty, this'll be the first time I go to any of these worlds. Except Treasure Planet, if you're adding it to the roster. But my concern is that at least most of them are very big worlds. So good luck with those.
I love the OCs so far. They have little quirks and tidbits that just make them fun. And a new incarnation of Oscar! At least he's not been forgotten. That and the older characters. I like what you've done. It's a shame we probably won't be seeing them much, but I'm OK with that.
Well, all the same and more of the same. Good luck and I can't wait.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
Chretner.
Gamelover41592 chapter 3 . 4/14
excellent work on this chapter and things seem to be going great for Dawn and Oscar but I have to ask what made you decide to do fate/stay night?
Gamelover41592 chapter 2 . 3/23
this is full of potential let's see where this goes and also Dawn better hope Salem catches her first before her dad does