Great chapter! I look forward to the next!

It was really fun to read about their take on circus, as it has been my love for quite a few years now. Eagerly waiting for the next update :) Good luck!

Hi! Very interesting premise, and I like your OC, I think she's brilliant!
Just a comment, and it's not meant to discourage you. Your chapters have great pace and characters, but these last two chapters were a bit too much tell and not enough show. Maybe there was too much content you wanted to tell and it would have been too long otherwise, it's your decision anyway. But scenes or dialogues, even internal dialogues, are often more engaging for the reader than a description of what happened. I still remember her meeting with Me! And the dolphins!
Anyway, yes I'm enjoying it! Please go on!

Thanks for the storyI wasn't sure I was gonna like this based on the description, but after reading your other DW fic and reading your note about this one I decided to check this out.

And oh boy did it pay off!

Great chapter! I love this story! I look forward to the next chapter!

Oh. My. Goodness. I’m loving your story more and more with each chapter! You are such a creative writer and come up with such unique outcomes and twists! It’s absolutely amazing to read. :)

Great chapter! I look forward to the next!

I personally find this fanfic truly incredible. I have read many but few have managed to entertain me as much as yours, because while the others are very predictable in your story I have no idea how it will continue, and I love it! I have kind of a crazy theory where The Editor, Addie and Jade are the same person, but with different bodies, but maybe it's all in my head and I really want to see how it goes on! I'm happy that Jade has dark skin, somehow it seems completely suitable and also, the interaction with the Ponds and the relationship with Melody are gems. Everything you wrote impressed me! Thanks. I really hope you can finish this masterpiece!

It was everyday life as a time traveling family.
I laughed so hard at that. Loved it.

Great story. I like how you have her jumping a bit. Hope you update soon.

Nice fic!

This is so cute! I love it! Jade going baby kuala is great X3 and having Melody Popping up is a great add on! Loving the story so far~

I like this. Oh my god I like this a lot. I can’t wait to read the next chapters. Our girl has Doctor wrapped around her little finger.