This is an excellent story so far.

This was fun to read. Writing was solid and grammar was good. I didn't have any complaints about anything. I'm excited to read the next chapter. Thanks for your hard work.

Excellent fic so far, keep up the great work!

like the story hope you update soon keep it up

So... Is Naruto learning his own version of the Byakugo no In? Because it would make perfect sense as to why Mito had the seal clearly on her head, which might imply that the seal has been passed down the Uzumaki clan until Mito passed it down to Tsunade. The fact that the Boruto manga had the Byakugo be from the time of the Rikudou Sennin, it just makes more sense. What some fans get confused about is the fact that Tsunade did not create the Byakugo seal itself, but a derived technique from it known as the Creation Rebirth, so the Byakugo itself belonged to Mito.

good chapter, greetings.

Weak it looks like you made her even more stronger then she was in the anime and manga. -_-

I am enjoying your story line and how things are progressing! Keep up the good work. The description of the shop was great I thought you captured it well. Looking forward to further updates.

I really really hope you'll add Kakashi into the mix.

Nice chapter. Looks like Naruto became Deku. When is he going to use the 'Shoot Style'? And Naruto is the youngest of the Rookie 9. Ino is actually 5 weeks older than Naruto, not a year younger. While this is not absolute canon everyone accepts Naruto as the youngest. This makes more sense than Naruto being a year older than Ino but still be in the same class(age wise) as her. You're actually the first person I read that wrote Naruto as older than the Rookie 9.

Nice chapter

Hmm, something you need to think when you shortening the fight scene is that you need to be careful about details. After all if you shorten it but it lack detail it would become bad(imo).

Anyway I wonder if Naruto can turn his control seal as he wish? If he can than that would be very good for him. When he need control he active it, when he need Kyuubi infused regeneration he deactivated it. Haha

I wonder if you get the idea using bird for Ino from Game of Thrones? That actually good idea, with this maybe Yamanaka would be able to become another tracking clan. I wonder why I never see something like that. Haha

Hoh.. I kinda expect Naruto would meet with his anbu escorts.
Is it Orochimaru that send the info?

I just realized that I miss this chapter. No wonder I kinda confused when I read chp 6 lol

wearing sandals? inside the house? blasphemy lol
very enjoyable to read. waiting for naruto and tsunade to meet!