Why is it that the the "Light" guys think self defense is murder? That always baffles me. Someone needs to beat them with a fish.

A very interesting beginning to what promises to be a really good story. I have read quite a number of "FanFiction" stories, and many have been good. It looks like it will likely take a few chapters to get all your main characters and store line fleshed out, but with the hints provided I like where I see this going.

Thanks for sharing!

Dude, it's UNTIL. NOT TIL. Stop spelling it like that.

Magical Cores?
It is awful,

Outside of that, you handled Ron nicely.

is Harry's blood radioactive like Peter's would have been had he been spiderman. I'm assuming peter wasn't bitten in this continuity.

Excellent story so far.

you know peter powers are partially magical in origin right. its part of being a spider totem. wich is useful cause his ability to stick work through his entire body, including back and face. so he can stick someone to his back for swinging ans his mask will never slip off.

Nice work

Great Story! Thank you for sharing your talent!

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This is absolutely shit.

Interesting fic so far.

There are two things that seems a bit US-centric. First, people in the UK are highly unlikely to be concerned with the cost of medical treatments. The National Health Service is free, and precriptions only cost a nominal amount. That Harry got free medical treatment (even if it was a private clinic), would not impress anyone.

Second, Harry talks about a garbage disposal. These are extremely rare in Europe, so it seems like a strange example for Harry to bring up. The common way to get rid of biological garbage is through recycling bins or simply by composting in the garden.

Harry should've kicked craple in the nads for that.

A great story here so far!

eh? change of pairing?

eh? change of pairing