I see it's been awhile since you've updated this. I encourage longer chapters to really understand how your main OC is feeling! Good first few chapters otherwise, though :)

Ah, the sassy teenager lol we all have one of those in our lives, or we used to, or we were one of them at one point haha.

At this point, I would've liked to see more of a physical description of Dhaivhlia aside from her blue hair.

Hey, from reddit!

This is a pretty good back story for your OC but the italics...it's a lot for the reader to read. It isn't really necessary to put the entire chapter in italics especially since you stated it's an origin/prologue chapter.

Hi there. Renchan7 from Reddit again. I was excited to see this was an Avengers fic! Interesting OC you have there. The buildup to her is interesting and so is her race's powers.

“The wind was cruel that evening.” Oh my gosh, that is a heck of a beginning sentence. It perfectly sets the kind of ominous tone for the story. And the writing is beautiful, so clear and easy to read with amazing description. I’m already fascinated by these characters and I’ve only read Chapter One! The pronunciation guide at the top is so very helpful too; if that wasn’t there I would have spent quite a while trying to figure out how those names were pronounced. This is a great start!

I get the cockiness but i would also like to see a good, fragile side of either if you asked me.

I like how you write conversation.

Slowly establishing the character traits i assumed.

It was alittle hard to read the names first but i got used to it later.
May i suggest something? Using fancy words and descriptions are all great yes but sometimes the writer may forget to explain what excatly going on, which felt like the case here -it also might be felt like it because my english is non-native- i, as a writer, also do this from time to time so when everything happens a few sentenced to what just happen in as brief and simple as possible might be a good idea.
If you decided to do this just finish the scene with something like -it's just an example- "They just killed the burglar, what a turns off events!"

Other than that It looks good by the way.

Fandom blind reader entirely. It’s really too early to make an assessment here, in part because the two chapters are very different. The first is hard-hitting and full of action, arguably the most evocative chapter you’ve produced so far.

It’s hard to know what to make of Part 2. There’s a sense that Dhaivhila is gifted and bratty, and clearly someone is chasing her (possibly the same folks from the previous chapter). My guess is that much will be revealed later, putting this chapter into a clearer context.

Intriguing start, at least. Best of luck with it.

Ooh. Plant manipulation? And it's a natural thing? That's cool! I love how vivid you made the descriptions! I'll be keepin' an eye on this one!