this is great cant wait for more.

are u still working on this

WH07! I love yuh girl, and the chapter is tops! Keep it up, and I may even manage to fix up most of the Ewoks!

I realise it's been a while (I used to be Kaeldra), but I just came back to fanfiction on a lark, and ended up re-reading all of this in order to bring myself up to speed. This is fabulous. Just the essential idea is really clever. Ocassionally the fight scenes can be a little confusing, but after looking over them a second time, I usually get into the swing of it and move on. Anyway, I shall anxiously await a new chapter; thanks for the wonderful read.

and the plot is thickening...

yes. I do understand perfectly the horror that is school. (taking hard as hell classes myself with books to read and papers to write- the Darth Writers Block makes his appearance numerous times)

the story is good, though there wasn't a lot of anything in this chapter, you explained why and I understand, thank you for not abandoning us. Keep it up.

(and the new SW book came out a few weeks ago, I for one thought it was a complete bomb, there was hardly any Jag! And there wasn't ANY Kyp, and why the hell was Zekk there? I remember them leaving in sort of bad terms back on Hapes... A total disaster..In fact I think Jag was a little confused too.)

Bye!

-Jaya

It's nice to see that you're still around and writing! And I like that the ending is happy and pleasent-I've been around too much doom and gloom with my own fic, but I digress.

Despite its short length, you've managed to twist the plot a great amount, which leaves room for suspence even though the ending isn't really a cliff hanger (though, in a way, it sort of is, but a humerous one rather than a worrisome one). Anyway, I like it. Sometimes I think people are too concerned with length over content and sometimes a short chapter is better in the way that it whets people's appetites but it doesn't overwhelm them with info. Awesome job and I can't wait for more!

Gwen

omg squee yay! sorry yah that was lame but this fic is really good... lol mucho better than anything i could do. keep it up

So excited to see an update here. This is one of my favorite fics out there, so... :)

The scene with Corran, Mirax and Mara was really well done. They were all very real feeling, and I can understand Corran's frustration because he feels that the girls are just being used.

I'm very interested to hear more about Corran and Mirax, though I confess I'm more interested in the trio of girls.

Not liking the Yuuzhan Vong dreams Tahiri's having- kinda worries me, because I was all hopefull that she wouldn't get messed up by them in this fic.

I don't think they were ooc in this one. Tahiri's allowed to have bad dreams, and Danni's the type that would comfort her. And then of course, she's also the type to encourage her in her thing with Anakin. :)

... You make me sad. Please update!

SG Jaina

Please?

'cause, seriously, if you don't, the Ewoks WILL suffer.

Kazie-

Why have you abandoned all us Star Wars people. I feel very unloved, and will probably eventualy be so angry I begin to cause bodily harm to small animals.

Seriously though, please updated soon, I love this story!

-SG Jaina

P.S. JJ all the way!

they have cellphones! haha. awesome!

well, loved the chapter and want you to update!

(Nice Jag btw, love him to pieces!)

-jay

Still an awesome story. I just have one little nit-pick. Jag has green eyes, which is incredible insignificant, but I'm picky like that. Otherwise, it's an incredible story, that you should continue.

(X-Wing got an ID)

Whe! Thank you! Are we ever goimg to find out what scale this takes place on? I mean, I can tell at least at this point it's not interplanetary, but then where did the Vong come from?

Thanks SO MUCH for keeping this story going!

Saber Girl Jaina(X-Wing)

I've been reading this for a while, but never actually reviewed and I felt bad for that.

This is a really excellent and interesting story. I love how you've encorporated the personalities of the characters we know into an entirely different world. (or galaxy?)

I've really enjoyed the little bits of humor and the scenes that show the real side of their personalities and how they're real people and not just droid-ish assaisin (sp?) types.

A tiny complaint in that it's sometimes a little confusing trying to figure out who is who in the scenes where you don't use many names, like the first part of chapter 8. Eventually you figure out who is who,but it's a little confusing sorting it out at first, and honestly, since we already knew who the three men in the scene were, it just made it difficult to read.

(I think I figured it out anyway. Jacen, Anakin, and Kyp, right? It's just confusing because I thought they were supposed to wait for Jag before they did something... Maybe it's just me. Sorry.)

Shouldn't Wynessa be Wynssa?

I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with the whole situation with the guys and the gals, and especially with Wyn, and then with Han and Leia, and most importantly with Jaina. I hope you'll be going in the Jaina/Jag direction with her, which would make this even better. If you don't, I'll force myself to read on and just pretend that the chapter after the end involves Jaina and Jag getting together, because this fic is far too entertaining to stop reading just because of a pairing. :o)

I think that's about it... I can't wait for more, I hope it's J/J, and thank you so much for sharing this fic. ;o)

it's so nice that you take the time to respond, and even nicer that you're considering my thoughts! it was a great chapter, and the story is getting more and more interesting! good work!