My heart ached at the end. I found myself hoping

Great fic! I loved the emotion displayed in it between Jin and Kazuya. It made it more real. Thanks for posting!

This was amazing. I really do feel for Jin in canon and can only imagine how he'd react seeing his mother alive again. Kazuya's fascinating as well. Thank you for writing this.

Oh gosh this is sooo beautiful :'(

I love your interpretation of this ending and how you created a highly emotional story around it. I agree that Jin and Kazuya don't seem to hate each other that much. Heck, they didn't even know of one another's existence until the fourth tournament. I know they're fated to fight to the death in canon. But I wish there was more to their relationship than that :-(

Anyway, well done! Your English is excellent for a second language. I hope to read more Tekken stories from you. We definitely need more 3

Damn I was shocked when Kazuya suddenly hit him. But then again I should have seen that coming. Not OOC in a way that’s weird. I actually could imagine it happen like this. Nice work :D

Oh it’s so sad, I’m crying. Never thought Kazuya could show love but you made it seem realistic because the devil was missing for a moment. Wish he could fight more and stay good, Jin needs his daddy :( love this story hope you write more 3