Very nice start of this new storie, so after the hospital Rachel has to go home to that nasty aunt? Oh my, that will be horror. Hope you'll find time to update the next chapter.

Love it

I really like the start of this story! And I really like that Santana and Rachel are best friends. I think they balance each other out well. Looking forward to more!

thanks!

Rachel is spinning out of control with no steady parental figure. Maribel Lopez may be like a Mom to her, but that does no good if she doesn't know all of the things that Rachel's been up to that put her in danger.

Thank goodness for Shelby's need for coffee or she never would have known what's going on with her little party animal. Rachel's Aunt is an abusive tool and they need to file charges against her so that she can't get near Rachel again.

As an asthmatic,from an asthmatic family, I feel Rachel. I hate breathing treatments, they make me throw up almost every time with my gag reflex, but they're a necessary evil. I don't blame her for hating them.

Good job and I look forward to more of all of your stories.