Reviews for Summertime Fun
Rainbine208 chapter 2 . 6/25
You need to do a meeting with yang and ruby or rwby and NPR for the comedic factor if nothing else.
Bruce USSR chapter 2 . 6/6
Banging your best friend's mom. That gonna go well.

I'm not sure why I even read this fic in the first place but there is definitely some screw loose in my head right now.
KristoferViloria chapter 2 . 5/3
Wait.

Does Summer really have big breasts in canon RWBY events?
StonerMcWeedPot chapter 2 . 4/27
Wholesome ending there. I’d definitely like to see Ruby and Yang’s reaction to Jaune and Summer. Also, have you thought about writing a Jaune/Raven fic?
Dax379 chapter 2 . 4/14
Great ship, actually. Naughty!Summer is something I haven't seem much of, but you make it work!
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I mean, of course you do, you're Mallobaude, you managed to make the objectively worst ship (PineRose) not painful to read about, so I should've figured that I was gonna love what I'm reading here, but damn.

This? This is the shit. You're the shit, man. I'd enjoy to read a new chapter of this sometime soon.
Hmason chapter 2 . 4/12
loving the story so far, my advice would be have Ruby just be adorable awkward and ask "does that make Jaune our new Daddy?" Yang sputters in shocked horror ,Weiss jaw dropped because of the MASSIVE upgrade from her Summer is. and Blake her perverted self thinking "Oh Spank me Daddy" i think you can get this to atleast 7 chapters if you continue as is, too few JaunexSummer fics out there
Adol116 chapter 2 . 4/12
Love the story looking forward to where you take it
bjenk4 chapter 2 . 4/11
Please i would like some more sm...adult literature, nah would love to see this expanded into a full story though with ruby and yang’s at first disapproval but rapid acceptance of Jaune as potentially their new step father. eventually summer and Jaune discussing have a child of there own (20 chapters away?)
Mac-The-Editor chapter 2 . 4/2
Meeting Ruby and Yang would be fun, but so would a meeting between Summer, Saphron and Terra.

I could see it playing out with Summer happily shopping, with Saphron acting the same way as they both talk about how much they each love their significant other, when lo and behold, Jaune and Terra come walking into the store, having met near the food court.

Saphron's surprised to see her baby brother, up until that surprise turns into shutting down when Summer practically floats over and starts flirting with Jaune, which especially shocks Saphron because *he flirts back.*

Cue hilarity, and Saphron dragging Terra off for some funtimes, while Jaune is mostly oblivious, due to being happy to see Summer get along well with his oldest sister.
yomunot chapter 2 . 4/1
Saucy
fireball900 chapter 2 . 4/1
Ruby and Yang coming into the house, hearing them in the bedroom, and then promptly leaving - multiple times in the same day.
Finally just biting the bullet and yelling for her to keep it down, and then semi-recognising Jaune's voice when he says 'sorry!'

Only finding out it's him the morning after when he cooks them all breakfast, and they slowly (after fully waking up with coffee) realise just how he got there so early...
246vili chapter 2 . 3/30
Nice story. More... how do I say it?..."action packed" than the other Jaune x Summer fic you made not too long ago.

Will the chapter of meeting Ruby and Yang include them finding out Summer's in a relationship?
And they wouldn't be Ruby and Yang from Team RWBY if they didn't start to... investigate this "future dady". Maybe even end it with them figuring it out and comming to the horrifying revelation that their mom's suitor is not only a guy their age, but one of their friends.

Of course that would be the end of poor Jaune, but the reactions from the gang would be hilarious... all except for Pyrrha maybe, she would be most likely devastated that Jaune took her advice about "more fish in the sea" the wrong way.

Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/29
Awsm, hoping for more!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/29
Woah!
hellfire45 chapter 2 . 3/28
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and I love that this pairing is getting the attention it should
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