oh wow okay i just got my heart broken.

this story is incredible. the ending hurts, but holy *shit* dude this is so good

I really love this one. I mean I got sad but I really understood what you meant about your choice of ending and I agree as well. I REALLY love how you wrote Rose and Charlie's blossoming love for each orher... Im. Favourite-ing the heck out of this one. Thank you so much for writing it.

Thanks for the read.

Okay I still love this story but WHY would you end it like this! It was so short. I wish there was more.

Blech. I get it, life sucks, lets reflect that in writing. But dude!

Awww, man. I always like Rosalie happy. And if Charlie feels the connection, too. . . Still, maybe they can reconnect in the future. But it sucks to think Rosalie will have to live the rest of her long life alone. :o(

I’m sad but I liked it. I’m excited for a sequel lol!

Bittersweet maybe but still beautiful. Lovely story!

T_T really wished her and rose was together

I love their relationship! They’re so cute! I’m excited for the next update!

Whoa! Now I know there is a water horse in Frozen II. You almost ruined the whole thing for me, lol. But seriously, any big spoilers before I get to watch it, and I'll be super upset. Anyway, I really like that you have Charlie in a different social circle than Bella generally was in. I mean it's a small school, but not THAT tiny. There is more than ONE table in the lunchroom to sit with. And Charlie's friends seem much nicer. Thanks for updating, and an interesting difference regarding Charlie's scent.

Emmets analogy was amazing don't let them bully you big guy! Also Bella's "why wont you guys eat me *pout*" is adorable. Thanks for the update

Ooof. OOOOF. Big feels and beautiful writing has me crying :(

End of chapter two and I'm already getting sad that this is only six parts long its so good :(

First chapter down and it's really good! I like how you've introduced the protagonist, fleshed out her personality and all round made her feel like a person. Loopy Charlie was funny too. Also having a better relationship with dad Charlie is nice to see. OG Bella was...not nice to her father.