Amazing I loved it! I wish I could find more like this.

Ok, I’m excited for the next one

Great story!

Awesome story! This is the first story that I've read that utilized the heart virus beyond how it was used in canon. Despite this one ending, its nice to hear that you have some longer ones planned.

Glad you are doing that next story idea. Perhaps we will see an Android 18 that is slightly more "hard to get" and Gohan pinning for her? The story certainly requires some reimagining in order for Gohan to be there in the first place...and how to deal with the remote later on when krilin was to shut her down.

It was super sad!

But she was totally right! Goku was aa good father until he first die, then he never recovered his parenthood or his marriage, in reality he really died and nobody got the memo. The Goku that comeback was not the complete one, was the fighter! And maybe sometimes chichi had an occasional lover in him. After his second death they even never made the same relative age.

Gohan finished been the father of Goten and he didn’t do a very good job because he was a boy himself. At least Goten had two mothers and a brother in Trunks. Gohan was always alone.

Excellent work can't wait for the next one

Sad it’s over it was a fun ride while it lasted though

Hmm that’s an interesting scenario. I’m guessing Krillin takes Bulma, baby trunks, and Yajirobi away. Similar to Krillin, Gohan doesn’t jump the gun. Where would it go from there though? I’m rather curious where’d you take it since Gohan and Goku weren’t as featured as other characters during that arc.

Awww that was heart warming

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Good so far, I look forward to reading more in the future.

Chichi and 18 now know where eachother stands and that’s a lot better than 18 and goku. Also the age gap between gohan and 18 is around the sand as the age gap between 18 and krillin Since a lot of her time was spent in stasis/suspended animation. It’s cool to see that chichi is rational in this instance.

Nice story! Really enjoying the rapid updates but don't over work yourself!

I get the feeling Gohan has the same or a similar kind of virus that Goku had when he was fighting android 19

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