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There are so many useless words in the sentences, either misspelled or misplaced words are everywhere and makes this kinda annoying to read cool idea but needs some cleanup

Well...Beelzebub should be next I suppose.

Our main character is teleported into the game like jumanji lol and has to survive as a virgin to get out of the game.

About Ingvild studying japonese: first, her father is japonese, so it should be her one of her first languages. Second, she is a devil, a half,yes, but still a devil and devils aren't affected by Babel tower curse and because of that, they are able of understand all languages of the world.
You can do it anyway for history progression, I just wanted make a point there.

Awesome update. Wonder what will happen next. It’s so much different from cannon.

"IN CLICHE GERMAN VOICE"

We have ways of making you talk explain this plot twist!

Lucifer in his body, so he actually trusts what Lucifer says, even as said Lucifer is explaining how him reaching out to his family is too dangerous, AKA, he's fucked

Is he going to have an Artificial Sacred Gear like the original story?

OK, first thing first, I didn't expect Mister Morningstar himself to appear in a dreamscape. I like the way you depicted him, an asshole but knows when to stop.

Ingvild and Tiamat in Kouh? And now Ravel will enroll as well and Hoitsu will have to give the girls a tour of the school? Yeah, this could go two ways, either Kouh is going to be destroyed or it's going to go so bad that it will go full circle to being good but not before kicking Hoitsu in the balls.

Also, didn't Raynare use red/purple/crimson spears? I'm not sure if Fallen Angels or normal Angels for this matter can change the color of their spears. I could be wrong, my DXD knowledge is a bit rusty.

Explorers in the further regions of experience. Demons to some. Angels to others.

*shot through the heart* ...h-help... I-I can't handle... it's too cute... *dead*

Very glad to see that the Riser/Diodora plot is changed, that did always feel a bit forced

I almost thought that Hoitsu went Ultra Instinct

gg and need more chapters