Reviews for Walking Worm
ivanacco1 chapter 5 . 5/26
If you are uncomfortable then change the age of the mc, make him 20 so that there isnt that much of an age gap.
Guest chapter 5 . 5/1
went from a serious writing effort, to a semi serious effort, then to a casual effort focused more on trying to be witty and funny than an actual good story. Sad to watch a story start crashing so early
shypunk chapter 5 . 5/2
well i find my self enjoying the story keep it up author'kun
BloodElemental chapter 5 . 5/1
If you are uncomfortable with underage relationships then dont write them.

Readers usually go by what the main character thinks.
This main character believes dating someone 17 is creepy. So why write it at all?
If there literaly all there is going to be is holding hands then why dont scrap it all together and move on with the plot instead of continue to write what amounts to this 'lol I think panacea is hot and want to bang her, but she 17 so its ilegal and creepy man, so I'll only groom her until she is 18 no biggie' every other paragraph?
zArthur chapter 1 . 4/30
i wanted to like it but i cant, everything is just way too much, too much power, too much chuuni, very little care and after thought, too much power high, meh character interactions i can keep going and going. Feels like written by day dreaming middle schooler? tho quality of writing is decent.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/28
He's too casual/cringey/creepy about his relations.
superpierce chapter 5 . 4/30
Great chapter loved it.
Loke13 chapter 5 . 4/30
Very good
frytrix chapter 5 . 4/30
Looking forward to read more.
Keep up the good work.
Unknown9501 chapter 4 . 4/28
Do a bowtie and if she comments on it make him say bowtie's are cool just to see if she knows the reeferense
alertpoet91 chapter 5 . 4/30
Great Chapter! If you do not feel comfortable or just do not want to write smut then don't, you should not feel pressured into doing so.
shugokage chapter 5 . 4/30
Hilarious ending scene and great chapter!
Silber D. Wolf chapter 5 . 4/30
Awesome
frankieu chapter 5 . 4/30
nice chapter thx for writing it
interesting chat with the handeler wonder what blackwell has to say
frankieu chapter 4 . 4/29
thx for the omake nice to see the meme of clone's doing stuff is going strong
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