I kinda like the beginning but you really should capitalize names and first word in a sentence bro, it’s giving me a headache.

This is brilliant. Update this pleased.

i dont get why harry will just call percy a monster he just said that he wants to kill voldermort for killing his family shouldnt he sympatize

Neat. I like the concept and the potential. I look forward to the next chapter.

seeing all demigods abilities who should put them so high above wizards it's really incoherent for Annabeth to just get killed like that