| Reviews for This Mess Is Mine |
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Guest chapter 25 . 7/30 I loved this. Everything is so realistic. |
pam48 chapter 25 . 7/29 Wonderful! I was so happy reading it! I love baby Olive! Can't wait to know Ben's secret! |
Hartmannclan chapter 25 . 7/29 Just the bestest warm toasty marshmallow feelings :)))))))) |
Guest chapter 25 . 7/28 Gracias por este capítulo, es tan tierno :) |
RedPandaJoy chapter 25 . 7/28 My heart has melted! |
BrokenMentality chapter 25 . 7/28 *draws deep breath in* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *screams in excitement from the cuteness* this was so fucking cute omg i can't! Having Olive's nickname be 'Liv is one of the cutest things I've ever seen! This was gorgeous, absolutely gorgeous! |
Guest0314 chapter 24 . 7/25 Absolutely loved the childbirth chapters. You made it real, with humor and emotion. Plus the roller coaster that comes to the mom afterwards. Loved it. Can't wait to read how the gang responds to Olive and coming home. |
Guest chapter 24 . 7/12 Hermoso capítulo :) |
BrokenMentality chapter 24 . 7/11 "burrito of a baby" omg XDD also...i have no words. this was amazing! this was so well written, and it made my heart happy inside at the cuteness of it. It's also super surreal bc it's so weird imagining Rey from the movies pregnant and Ben from the movies holding a baby lmao hahaha. Needless to say, this was adorable and so amazing! Really well done! |
Guest chapter 24 . 7/11 This story is so good |
Vala chapter 24 . 7/11 If I could put the cry emoji I would |
louisa.alby chapter 24 . 7/11 kay' done, you make me cry happy tears this chapter. and i don't mind one bit. thank you so much for writing this beautiful story! take care and stay healthy... |
Dw.618 chapter 24 . 7/11 This chapter was so beautiful...I love how powerful Rey felt, how she immediately knew to comfort Olive, how affected Ben was, how Leia praised Rey for her strength before even looking for Olive, ...and Ben singing to Olive...swoon! By the way, I want to tell Rey that breastfeeding shouldn't hurt. If Olive has her mouth opened up sufficiently, the sensitive part of the nipple is so far back in her mouth that her tongue isn't touching it at all. If Rey is feeling pain while nursing, she needs to immediately use her pinky finger to break the latch, then help Olive latch on again better. Please consider sharing this message with your readers as something that Rey learns along the way. You've been so accurate about so many of Rey's fears and feelings and worries...please help others know that breastfeeding shouldn't involve pain and that it is often needed to get help from a lactation nurse to get the positioning right. |
Guest chapter 24 . 7/11 Love the story and the last couple of chapters have totally brought me back to the birth of my daughter. Wonderful! |
Advennis13 chapter 24 . 7/10 It's so beautiful *cries* |