I saw "Not reincarnation" and I didn't even finish the summary. Sign me up! A proper OC!

that is a good move to let the trio investigate naruto's parents. i cant think of the effect befriending those other three will be and i totally want to see where this will bring the strory about.

I really like that short about Kiba, it was niceAnd thanks for answering my question about Sakura! It'll be interesting to see what you do with the characters, especially when Sasuke is actually talking to Naruto and Shiina- he even apologized! I also wonder how the dynamics in the group of three will turn out too, now that they're living together and watching each other's back. Can't wait to read what happens next!

You've done a really good job with your story so far, I really like it! I'd be really awesome if the three of them ended up on a team by the end of their academy days- I feel like they'd become unstoppable if that happened. But unless it becomes a four-man squad, or you plan on taking our Sakura entirely, I can't see it happening... Although the little flash back explanation of things you do would probably help with keeping Sakura in readers attentions.
Can't wait to find out what happens next! Looking forwards to your next chapter!

I am actually glad how this turned out since there is a lot of possibilities now not just two pathways but anyway I actually didn’t predict it nor can read minds it’s actually just a coincidence and just my opinion you know and a suggestion since I really love this story and how you brought life to the characters, especially the extra story about hinata and her struggle at her own clan very very nice touch didn’t expect that seriously and I look forward for the chapter and how will it turn out, anyway you’ve done an excellent job in this chapter clearing things up and giving information about their next step, their goals, the way their thinking, it’s actually nice that you gave us in a more depths of the situation about danzo how they are becoming more cautious about him and Orochimaru giving us plenty of info about them but not all of it leaving us wanting for more quite catchy really, anyway as I said excellent chapter can’t wait for the next one.;))

nice chapter i cried

I do hope that sasuke wont be driven by revenge and shiina will explain to him what she found out about another person killing his clansmen and both she and naruto will convince him instead of revenge why don’t the three of them find out the truth instead of jumping to conclusion since itachi has been acting weird there must be a explanation and I hope sasuke will tell the others how he saw itachi cry even if its his imagination then I guess this will only strengthen that they should find the truth but well that’s just my opinion you know since if it did came out like at the canon it will just be very tiring you know and the plot will just keep circle around revenge and the both of them trying to bring sasuke back same old same old but I guess it is very tiring just thinking about but I guess with the three of them being close from an early age that means that he might not go in that path since his not alone in his grief hmmm well I just keep on tapping anyway nice chapter it did make me cry seriously straight from the heart, so heart wrenching hahaha nice work though. ;))

soo goooood. i like the water tree fire idea. totally original. and the interlude too.

. thank you for the extra info. i am actually pondering if she actually know about her lineage but now i know. the story goes really fast but without time skip. i like it. the trio realationship is so cute. this chapter did not have interlude. the fugaku kind of pov is good. too much forshadow. fufufufu. good job.

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thanks for the chapter. not too smooth but good enough. i can see both naruto and shiina become good at fuinjutsu but i dont know their Specialisation yet but i think shiina will get attached to the she know at the lab. maybe.

good story. you have a very clear view of how the character supose to behave and talk. the introduction is good enough for me to get hooked. her total lack of social skill is clearly shown but not trough enough. keep up the good work. i will be waiting.(σ)σ_