| Reviews for Don't flatter yourself - Revisited |
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   MAC Nicholls chapter 2 . 4/4 You mean this is it? Really! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/3 Your time line is off here, but you know that |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/1 Oh, I like the idea of another version! I hope you follow the suggestion! Mr B could be the second son of the old Duke and owner of many estates, but prefers to live discreetly so people forgot about him after many years away from London, after marriage to a lowly country maid. Congratulations on your book being published. We love your writing and wish you the best! |
| kurotenshi-08 chapter 2 . 3/31 When will the book be on Amazon? |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/31 Thank you for both versions of the story, loved them! Maybe you can even do a third one! ;-) How about if Mr Bennett was a titled gentleman, instead of the second Mrs Bennett being a Lady? What would change? Ohhh, he could sneak to London to be in Parliament for really important decisions, then be back to Meryton without anyone knowing... |
| Happywife chapter 13 . 3/31 I am glad to have been able to finish up this story! Good luck and thanks for sharing. Very much enjoyed it. |
| Jaylee Echos chapter 13 . 3/29 This story made my day. Thank you. |
| Nance13 chapter 13 . 3/28 Wow! I found my earlier enjoyment of the earlier version only intensified my pleasure here. Great fun! I think I might like this one a little better, but really there's no need to rank them. Thanks for both! |
| tarlily chapter 13 . 3/28 Nice version, though I missed the interaction with the Denton family. They were such characters! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/28 Thank you for a very nice story. In your editing, remember that fiance/fiancee are gender specific. You can also use the gender neutral 'betrothed' instead. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/28 What a lovely twist on my favourite story. Such a wonderful adventure into the usual P&P characters lives. I enjoyed all the different pairing and am glad it ended with HEA all around. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful AU story. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/28 A lovely story thank yoy x |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/27 This version of Lizzie is an unbearable snob, so pretentious she is the manners expert and knows best in all things riding, chess, the rest are just mere mortals. We’ll see if something brings her down to earth. Not really seeing anything remotely likeable about her. Caroline is better lol |
| ChrisM0519 chapter 13 . 3/27 Another great story! I'm looking forward to your next. |
| ChrisM0519 chapter 12 . 3/27 To say they all lived happily ever after is an understatement. It does show that being good gets rewarded. |
