Reviews for An Untraveled Road
Guest chapter 6 . 22h
Wow, another great chapter! Good job and keep them coming, I think cinders my favorite part!
Red saber chapter 6 . 22h
Naruto x Summer xRaven x Willow
Hecseferblade chapter 6 . 22h
You know I always figured Blake got the shadow part of her semblance from one of her parents. I like how you portrayed it.

Poor willow, Naruto really is super dense, literally took a war and getting kidnapped to the moon for him to realize and return Hinata’s feelings. Though I figured he’d eventually leave atlas, was hoping he’d at least actually get engaged to her. Is she gonna have a direct way for him to get to her when she needs him?

You know it just dawned on me that Adam didn’t get abused until Jacques was in charge, does that mean he isn’t a moody prick anymore?

As far as pacing goes I like how you are taking time to stretch out the training while at the same time establishing power levels in some of the characters.

Haha, can’t wait to see the headlines “Schnee heiress and Faunus fiancé meet with white fang representative” “Loving interracial atlas couple paves way for Faunus Equality” “Shnee’s Fiance makes history while meeting white fang ambassador”
And then the pics that were taken during.

Ironwood’s face when he reads the paper will be hilarious when he sees Naruto
808Joker808 chapter 6 . 7/27
good stuff as always bruv
anthonym3 chapter 6 . 7/27
What an enjoyable chapter. I love it. Please stay safe and continue this story!
anthonym3 chapter 5 . 7/27
Lol, Ironwood is gonna pester Naruto for the rest of his natural life now...
anthonym3 chapter 3 . 7/27
That twist with Cinder was precious...
Shifuru chapter 3 . 7/27
I seriously cannot wait for when Willow and Naruto have Winter and Weiss as super-babies! Will Naruto, Winter, and Weiss have both chakra and aurasemblance? Or is it chakra OR aurasemblance?
Considering that Aura is the manifestation of the soul, it might be possible to have both chakra and aura. But who knows really.

Anyway, really fun read. So much fluff I love it!
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 7/27
Well, that was certainly a long chapter but cool none the less, seems we met Blake's mum well I think it's her mum, the fights were greater also, can't wait for more should be interesting.
bankai777 chapter 6 . 7/26
Would Kushina approve of Willow?
ujangkuskus chapter 6 . 7/26
Really like this. Great works.
dracon867 chapter 6 . 7/26
Amazing story. Love everything so far. Totally ship the NarutoxWillow. I dunno I feel as though that pairing would be enough. If you add a harem in it might feel too cluttered. Taking away from the feel of the story instead of adding to it. That’s just my opinion as a reader. Pay it no mind. Looking forward to more from you
ChaosUnbound chapter 6 . 7/26
This is a suggestion.
In light of the recent poll results, I just wanted to say: Please, to god, don't do a harem. You have set up this fantastic family dynamic and I don't want anything to change about that. However, obviously you would have to compromise with the other readers of this fic. It could still be an interesting addition if you were to limit the harem to solely Raven and Willow, as you will inevitably have the interaction of Naruto with his children. Adding more members to the harem limits the emotional development that can occur with characters and would also detract from the overall value of the story, making it a standard cliche where there is no true continuous reasons for harem members to accept their positions, but do.
Thank You for Reading & That will be all,
ChaosUnbound.
P.S You do you, Author is spelled G-O-D after all.
shanandre765 chapter 6 . 7/25
Welp! This has to be the best naruto x rwby ive read awesome story m8!
Shadic21 chapter 6 . 7/25
Good chapter, I want to see the next part.
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