I LOVE THIS!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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This description of Zim's repentance looks like the Universe is out of alignment. Finally, it was explained why the green mouse carried the albino mouse.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!

With each chapter, this story gets better and better. I was very saddened by Laura's death and I was also impressed by Zim and Tak to acknowledge her sacrifice. I am concerned about Zim's current state, I hope he will recover and be well. Now Venaguile knows he has irkens on earth, and the three irkens and the Membrane family are in his sights.
I look forward to the next chapter!

Well, I believe enemies will possibly become the squad next chapter.

This chapter was the best so far! I am loving all the funny things.
Professor Membrane talking at his wife's grave shows that he is a sensitive man despite not seeming so much. Gaz and Zim doing things together are really cute! And furious Dib trying to get his little sister away from Zim never loses grace. XD
Venaguile is very close to this chaotic quartet. I can't wait for what comes next.

Even I would be afraid of this mutant mouse.
Zim and Skoodge's friendship is so precious.
Poor Tak, he's in the monster's sights. And where will she live now.

even now, that thing still manages to send a chill down my spine.

I'm so sorry for Tak.
Very nice to know that the author of the poem was sending notices to Dib.
It is striking that Zim had a lie detector device and had not used it in Gaz instead of tormenting himself about her sudden attitudes.
I'm glad your story is getting public recognition!

Can't wait to read more.

I am so impressed with this chapter.
Even I wanted to have a room full of robots to take out my anger.
It is a pity Zim to see that the acts and feelings he feels for Gaz are an affront to the irken empire. That was what was taught.
I'm sorry for Tak now.
I thought it was great that the modified mouse always pointed in the supposed direction where the monster is.
Wonderful this chapter, I look forward to reading what Zim will plan against Gaz.

OWWW what an amazing chapter!
I loved the confrontation between Dib and Tak.
And seeing Zim having fun with Gaz was cool.
I really thought he was going to abandon her in the mess. I'm glad he helped her.

Looks like Zim is going to be meeting this bloodlusting beast sooner than he even he thinks.

Gotta say, looking forward to the next chapter.

How irritating that Professor Membrane wants to deny that there are other forms of life in the universe.
I really want to read about the earth activities that Gaz will teach Zim. XD
That was another great chapter.

I don't understand why this story has no more comments, because it is sensational.
I wonder what would happen after the movie Enter The Florpus and its story is going in the direction of what I'm imagining.
These monsters you created and that eye in the sky remind me of the Titans that appear in the cartoon Espaço Final.
I love the depth you are giving in the friendship between Zim and Skoodge.
It's nice to see that Dib is still upset with Tak, and that Tak likes Dib, but he doesn't want to admit it.
Gaz saying that what Zim did is cute was epic.
I realized that in the synopsis you can put maybe ZAGR and DATR, oh man, I would love it if you really put these pairs together.
You write very well, I can't wait to read another chapter.