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"It's a pity that we haven't reached the level of Chakra harmonization required for the Hiraishin yet. Kaa-san let me see a map of where the Yondaime hid his tags and there is one close to every border observation post as well as several concealed in each of the other countries. Apparently, there is even a tag in one of the rocky ridges surrounding Iwagakure."

I don't get this. Isn't each Hiraishin mark unique to an individual. They should not be able to use Minato's markings.

I flipping love your writing. It never fails to make me smile.

I appreciate your stories. Can't wait for another to come about!

Extremely well written, and a great finisher to the series! Masterful job, sir! I look forward to reading more of your writings.

Pretty sure it's Kakuzu. You put "Kukazu"

Ah, it comes to an end. You found a decent enough spot to end it though. Sad to see though, I'd love to see you take this further. It won't really be the same under anyone else.

well, I wish you luck in your other ventures, this was a fun read.
-TCM

My only comment before i move on to chapter 19,

How on earth does Sasuke have his Rinne-Sharingan so early?

-TCM

An interesting end to the story, and I look forward to reading your next stories

I will never , ever read , follow or favorite one of your fics bc will the fics show complete all of them are left in limbo . They dont deserve the time lost on them .

- Dangling plot thread
One thing that has left me confused is as to who would count as Jiraiya's latest student between Naruto and Sasuke.

This due to the whole Nadeshiko Marriage angle that said position brings along. Currently Sasuke seems to be The One, which would also include the Prophecy by the by.

Thing is, I don't think that Fū is the sharing type, unless she was entering a preestablished relationship, but that's another bailiwick.

So that could present an issue.

The Naruto/Hinata angle on the other hand, while she wouldn't be happy about it, she would get the attached political issues with trying to block the addition and thus be more likely to grudgingly allow it. (Akin to the Shion angle in your Guyver cross.)

But guess it's a wait and see whether this gets adopted and whether the new author will even address the issue.

Good place to end things. I would like to see one chapter of Shipuden, to see what the guardian trio are like as young adults, but I can understand wanting to let a completed work be complete.

Dude, this chapter was EPIC!
I loved reading every moment of it and I am able to wait for more.
Please continue when you may. :)

Thanks for the story

I was happy to see this part ended right up until I read that there was no more coming ever ;_;

You've destroyed by dreams, oh Bearded One.

... okay, melodrama aside, THIS WAS FREAKING AMAZING! I'm beyond sad that you're abandoning it, but I enjoyed it while it lasted.