| Reviews for You Shouldn't Be Here |
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Ilovemybreath chapter 1 . 5/13 This is awesome! Thank you Kate for recreate the scene again... Makes much more sense to me... X Fran |
babzfgm chapter 1 . 4/26 Love it! The angst. Their reaction to each other, perfection. |
Jessicaa1567 chapter 1 . 4/10 Lovedddd this ! |
chdh1 chapter 1 . 3/18 perfect! |
iamdonnaspecter chapter 1 . 3/15 Definitely was a missing scene from the episode, I loved this addition. |
carlota206 chapter 1 . 3/15 very good and I loved it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15 I absolutely loved it! I'd love to read more |
LadyDarvey chapter 1 . 3/15 They really should have shot this ! |
CatsBalletHarveySpecter chapter 1 . 3/15 This was so good! |
mvsana chapter 1 . 3/15 Amazing |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15 That was incredible! |
cae-prince chapter 1 . 3/15 I'm just floored at how effortlessly you fill in these gaps, Kate, and every time I see a fic from you, I know I'm in for a fantastic read. This is no exception. This was a moment I had longed to see between them and I felt robbed when we didn't get it. Gosh, the way you've written Andy Malik's arrogance and cruelty made me feel exactly the way it did when I was watching the show: my skin crawled and my chest tightened. It's such a testimony to how perfect your writing is. And the moment between Harvey and Donna: I was in tears all through it. Seeing Harvey get arrested on the show was painful as it is, but this? This was just so heartbreaking yet beautiful. How Harvey's protective instinct kicks in, wanting to keep Donna far away from this and then seeing it turn into pure desperation and unwillingness to see her go. The way they can so effortlessly read each other's body language now is just so perfectly written here. Gosh, Kate. Thank you for writing this. xx Caroline |
pencilwitch chapter 1 . 3/15 THIS WAS PERFECT! Exactly what we were missing from that episode. You’re amazing. |