Okay, this was chilling. The ending was captivating. Even going in almost completely fandom blind, I'm itching to know who that man was, what were his motivations and if he's actually responsible for the bombing as well. If you hadn't mentioned it, I would have no idea that this story consists of only OCs because they are written very deftly and three dimensionally. You clearly have a strong handle on Douth, his POV, and beliefs, and yet the world is fleshed out enough for me to tell that his perspective is just one of many. The technical aspects of the writing are clear, evocative and easy to follow, and his niggling tension about trusting the twileks was an excellent line of tension through this piece - I don't think it would be right for me to offer any other type of concrit without knowing the fandom in depth!