| Reviews for Twisted |
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Guest chapter 7 . 6/19 update? |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18 Was happy to see an update :) Cora has a really interesting backstory, can’t wait to find out more and see where the story goes! |
Guest chapter 6 . 4/14 Poor Cora... what a horrible nightmare. Adrian sure sounds like a jerk lol I wonder if she met Sypha. |
Wicken25 chapter 5 . 4/14 Interesting is she a time traveller or is this a parallel universe |
Hikari-Moonlight chapter 5 . 4/10 Hello! I'm loving this story so far! I like how you describe the different scenes and how the characters don't feel OOC. I'm looking forward to reading what else you have planned for this fanfic! I hope you can update soon! Best wishes! H.M. |
Squid chapter 5 . 3/28 Really enjoying this story so far! Can’t wait to see where it goes and to learn more about her past |
Odeveca chapter 5 . 3/27 I liked this chapter alot great work! |
starrat chapter 5 . 3/25 I liked it looking forward to the next |
Valkyrie Vitani chapter 4 . 3/24 I love this. It’s hard to imagine what if Lisa was still alive and I can’t wait to see you incorporate for the big baddie or will Dracula still play the role as the ultimate evil |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/22 Mother Lisa to the rescue. Vlad, you better be nice to sweet Cora, and Adrian, stop being an annoying shit! I want to hug that poor girl. Hilarious scene: tiny Cora trying to stealthy follow Dracula to learn more about him, while said Count watches amused, as said tiny woman follows him around the castle quite like a shadow. He’d amuse her, then totally play with her, while she’d huff and puff, since she has to run in order to reach such a tall man. Adrian would also follow her around, because he’s curious and feels guilty, but she’ll want to stay away from, at least for a while, and this would make him quite irritated, because he really want to speak to her and apologize properly. He’d follow her around, and she’d expertly avoid him, to his annoyance, and she’d follow Dracula, who’d be so very amused by the game of his son following the girl, and she following him, but none of them never succeeding in their endeavors. Lisa would tsk at his poor sense of humor, but the deep down she’d find the situation quite hilarious. Lisa would dote on Cora so much, a lost like she wanted to make up for the girl for all the suffering she’s been through; she’d give Cora warm hugs, play with her hair, offer clothes, maybe tuck her in. I think deep down Lisa would want a daughter, and having Cora in their castle would make said woman so darn happy. Also, it’s been a while since Adrian showed interesting in anything or anyone. Cora would feel so excited with this new arrangement. The castle was incredible, Dracula was interesting and his knowledge made her want to forever stay there in order to learn as much as possible. Adrian is annoying, but Lisa is so kind, good and overall amazing that she’d put with her son just make the woman smile. Wonder if in a new and safe environment, all the nightmares and trauma would make themselves known in the form of nightmares and panic attacks, because her in safety and with her guard relatively down, her mind won’t need to suppress anything negative for her to survive. So screaming, night terrors and panic attacks should be expected. Lisa would be there with her, and so would Adrian. Can I ask for a cute scene in which Cora is having one terrible episode, but there’s no one around to comfort her, so Dracula himself tries to comfort a panicking human and he is so out of his depth that he doesn’t know what to do. So he does what he usually did when baby Adrian was sad of bad dreams (Adrian’s childhood sounded so perfect that I don’t even know if he ever had a reason to have nightmares): he caressed the girl’s head and shushed her in a kind voice, and then she kind of clung to him in a tight hug, and he realized that she was so small and delicate in his arms that he felt angry at what she had gone through. Deep down he wondered if that’s what felt like to have a daughter. Later, Cora would freak out because she hugged and cried on FReaking Dracula, and he was so nice to her... oh God, she’d feel embarrassed, and try to apologize and avoid him, but he’d just shrug and pat her head like she’s some sort of cute puppy his wife dragged in. She kind of is... she’d pout and huff, which would secretly amuse Vlad, but deep down he’d respect her. Also, he’d keep doing this because her hair is unbearably fluffy and soft and he had never seen a human with such hair so nice to the touch. Adrian... I think he’d want a turn at hugging the girl as well, because how come his mother AND father are allowed to? Also, her seemed incredibly soft... actually, now that’s she’s well rested and fed, she seems so soft, with her silky skin. Now that domestic stuff would also make interesting topics to come to light: for instance, if Adrian started to feel attracted to Cora, I wonder if his father would sit him and explain things to him because she’s human, my son. She’s fragile... that would be hilarious. Is Cor truly human or is she a Fae? Something like Sarah J. Maas’ Fae? Powers, pointy ears, fangs, very long lifespan (I don’t like the world immortal, because everything that lives/draws breath can be killed)? Anyways, awesome story. Question: her stealth made me wonder if she knows some form of martial art, like ninjutsu, kendo, karate, Kung fu... something that relies on stealth. Also, when is she going to reveal that she’s from the future? Because it’s evident that she’s from the twenty first century judging by her speech pattern and knowledge. Awesome story. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/22 Poor Cora. Lisa is an amazing person and Vlad is lucky to have her. |
starrat chapter 4 . 3/21 I loved it looking forward to the next chapter |
Clara The IG chapter 3 . 3/19 Shannyrox101 Are you talking about the Judgement game? Cause in the game, it was never really confirmed that Carmilla was responsible for Lisa's death, only Sypha's family. Anime wise, Lisa was falsely accused by the village wise woman cause of jealousy. |
Shannyrox101 chapter 3 . 3/18 No no no. Please don’t make daddy drac go insane. I really want to read a story about them teaming up with Belmont to take Carmilla down because she’s the one who orchestrated Lisa’s arrest. |
Clara the IG chapter 3 . 3/18 WAAAAAHHHH I wanted them to meet now DX. Lol I love how the "Mother Tone" is such a universal power. I'm already impatient for the next chapter. |