I love this story, I can't wait for the next update!
As much as I dislike cliffhangers this one was cliffhanger worthy lol Right now I'm so eager to know what’s going to happen next. I mean Sindatil is alive and I'm ever so curious as to what has happened to him and what he has to say about his situation. I'm also a big fan of your character Seasa, she's an interesting character with a difficult heritage being the daughter to Valneuma. I don't think that she is a bad person just born into a life were little choice or option was given to her.

I feel that Sindatil should share news that Valneuma knows that his daughter is captured but that he has not a care as to what they do to her. I feel like if Legolas hears this he and Aragorn would both be shocked but also furious that a father would care not that his own daughter is being put to death for crimes that are not truly her own. I feel like learning this piece of information will cause Legolas to want answers from Seasa. I'm sure Legolas would be curious to know why she would take orders from her father and even risk death when it was so cruelly admitted that her father cares nothing for her. The Legolas I know has compassion so I just get the feeling that he and Aragorn will not be willing to let her fade and die for the crimes that her father should be condemned to.

I feel like Seasa needs to be seen as not a traitor or spy but someone who was forced/ born into a situation where no alternative were possible. I feel that she should be able to prove herself to Legolas that she is nothing like her father and some how establish a sense of trust between herself, Legolas and Aragorn.

Anyway like I said in the beginning I love this story and I am obviously looking forward to the next update lol I just want you to know that I really appreciate all the hard work and dedication you've put into creating this story. I know it's not easy to write something like this and that it takes time. I just want you to know that I appreciate or rather love all that you've done to make this story as amazing and enjoyable as it has been for me so far lol
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TO INCREDIBLE TO BE LEFT UNFINISHED, I SIMPLY MUST KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND SO ON UNTIL THE VERY LAST CHAPTER!
IT TRULY WOULD BE TO SAD TO SEE THIS STORY LEFT UNFINISHED WHEN I AM SO ADDICTED TO IT AND WISH TO READ MORE LOL

SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE CAUSE I WOULD BE SO DISAPPOINTED IF THIS STORY WERE NOT TO CONTINUE TILL THE END! :(

Nice cliffhanger! Can't wait to find out what happened.

the story is great

the story is great

Impressive as usual.

Lost of good tension in this story. Though I can't help hoping that there will be some good news about something soon. )

~Iluvien~

wow i love ure story. I have never read a story like this. i am glad u have decided not to make the girl fall in love rite away and renounce her ways. keep goin it's great

this is a great story! please update soon :)

Intriguing and very entertaining.

I very much like Seasa spunk.

As well as the characterization of your Legolas.

I hope to see more soon.

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"Believe in Stars"? I say, BELIEVE IN TROLLS. This is so lame it could be one.

Wow. Creepy.
How are we going to work out way out of this one?
Please right more soon. )
~Iluvien~

Interesting dynamic between Aragorn and Legolas. Well done.
Oh, Legolas *is* getting rather possessive, isn't he?
How bad off is Saesa going to be when they finally get there?
~Iluvien~

You know how I said that the last chapter was powerful? Well, this one certainly didn't pale in comparison. I loved the way Legolas began to see the situation in his room.
And "yay!", Aragorn is here. )
~Iluvien~

Sorry I forgot to review this chapter (and the next one, and the next one) *blushes*
I just wanted to say that this was a very powerful chapter. I think this story is very cool and it made me happy to see that you had updated. Keep up the good work. )
~Iluvien~

That was a REALLY crappy place to stop ya know.
AH! I'm sick of cliffhangers.I really, really, REALLY like this story, so please don't stop now!

I like how you managed to add that Pirates quote in there!