Reviews for The Adventures of Rosie
YellowAngela chapter 28 . 7/23
Ryan is back? Suzie doesn’t sound nice. Farron is a good friend. Aaron is going to be jealous. Sleep paralysis? That’s a strange ailment to have. Waiting for the next chapter.
YellowAngela chapter 27 . 7/20
It's nice to see Rosie contribute to the team. I'm glad things are looking up for her. I wonder if Aaron will be jealous of Farron. LOL. I am concerned about Ava and where Van Kleiss might be. Looking forward to seeing the next chapter.
YellowAngela chapter 26 . 7/14
Well, I hope this review shows up. Looks like things might be improving for Rosie. It's good to see Ava and Aaron again. Rosie can have her mom help her with Spanish. She did teach Rex. I see you bring in a little MHA. Waiting to see where this goes.
YellowAngela chapter 25 . 7/11
I know I reviewed this but I don’t see it up. And when I tried to review again it said I did and won’t let me post again. So I don’t know what’s happening. But it’s a good if sad chapter. Hope things improve for Rosie.
YellowAngela chapter 25 . 7/9
Aww, I feel bad for Rosie. It's hard that she's losing so many people in her life. That and change is hard. Glad her mother was there to give her some advice. And that's a nice callback to Rex's line in Wingman. LOL
YellowAngela chapter 24 . 7/1
Personal experiences help make the stories more real. That's why they say people with more life experiences can write better stories. Although that's true, I think sometimes reading lots of different types of literature helps too.
Aww, poor Rosie... growing up is hard. Friends leave, friendships end, and you have to make hard decisions. Hopefully, it makes a person better rather than bitter. I don't think we've seen the last of Zane and the fact that Van Kleiss is on the loose is concerning.
YellowAngela chapter 23 . 6/26
Shoot, I thought I reviewed this chapter. I guess I'm developing early alzheimer's. So this was a very heartfelt chapter. I felt bad for Rosie and Ryan. I see relationship drama all the time in high school, not just romantic relationships but friendship relationships too. And you left it at a very ominous note. Looking forward to the next chapter.
YellowAngela chapter 22 . 6/20
No problem. I know reviews help keep me motivated to continue writing. And you know when you see a character making a mistake and you want to yell, “Stop! Don’t listen to him! He’s evil”? Well, that’s what I’m doing now with Ava.
YellowAngela chapter 21 . 6/15
Ooo, the plot thickens. Now you've gotten me worried about Aaron and Ava. Hope everyone gets out unscathed. Waiting to see what happens now.
YellowAngela chapter 20 . 6/10
Well, happy birthday to your family. School's not over for me yet. I still have a lot of work to do. Take your time with the story.
Interesting development in this story. I hope Rex and Six can take care of Zane. I hope Rosie and Ava's stay safe.
YellowAngela chapter 19 . 6/4
Good chapter. It’s nice to see some character building. And yeah, I didn’t Six would throw away his kid’s favorite things. Keep it up and stay safe.
YellowAngela chapter 18 . 5/29
Cute interactions. Rosie is a little mommy. Lol. But she’s also just a kid. Very realistic about her fears and wanting her parents to help her. Also love seeing Rafael and Violeta in other stories. Take your time with the story.
YellowAngela chapter 17 . 5/25
Glad everyone’s safe... for now. The interactions between Rosie and Ava are cute. Should be interesting to see what happens next.
SparrowSky1 chapter 16 . 5/20
Sorry I have not commented in awhile, I have had a lot going on. It was nice to catch up to the story! awww poor Ava and Rosie. I wonder how Six was taking all this? And Great work! Cant wait for another update!
YellowAngela chapter 16 . 5/20
Finally, Six and Rex showed up. Now it’s a party. Haha. Zane rhymes with insane. He does seem a little over the top.
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