Now, see... I can follow it here, and then read it again in AO3 and that is a win-win. By golly, you're good.

I, um, oh...wow. Oh, my. I need to... my god.
I'll be back next chapter with a better comment.
I need some water.

since the good stuff is on Ao3 I'll see you there!

This is really good! I think you could use a(nother) editing pass, though; there are some grammatical errors and some things that don’t make sense story-wise (e.g., there’s a paragraph where you mention Kirishima when you must mean Kaminari, contextually). That said, looking forward to whatever KiriBakuChako smut lies ahead, and hoping to see development on the KamiJiro too.

Damn this was hot af !

It is official. I need this to keep on living. I love your work, can't wait for the next update.