Loved the Jay vs Jay fight and the descriptions of the different versions merging together. I hope they made the right choice at the end.

loved the ending!

SNAP I almost forgot that Jay had the ability to control lightning in this. My mind kept flipping between this and "When Lightning Struck the Earth". But DANG I actually thought Cole wasn't going to make it back. I was scared? I thought something bad would have happened to him after he started experiencing what the Cole in that timeline felt.

But also the POWER COUPLE THING! AHHHH that was so cute w

Cole? Crying?! I love that. I love when he's the one who breaks down in the relationship. I feel like it's just in character for him? Like he has more reasons to feel that way than Jay. I also watched A Whisker Away couple days ago and when Yori cried instead of Muge, that was what this reminded me of.

But dang, he still... kinda... messed up. Didn't he?

wow, a lot went down in this chapter! can't wait to see what happens next.

I really liked the description of the memory web, very interesting. Cole and Jay's conversation was just so good!

Good job Clancee! Awww the Before scene was so sweet, I just love those 2 together. Uh oh, I hope Dr Gordon's idea works.

I love it when Kai and Nya team up! And the Before section, wow, I didn't see that coming, that was so good, so heartbreaking!

They can't catch a break! Alone together for a few minutes after everything that's happened, and then Jay ends up in jail. Not sure what to think about Wu.

I'll stop with the "i'm getting _ vibes from this" after this review bc it's getting old, but it's true! I'm still getting a lot of Harley Quinn vibes lol. And some Ducktales Della vibes from Jay's mom? But this was an awesome chapter! Poor Jay. I love the reference to After and Before from Jay, himself. But "Now"? That was good.

STARTS SCREAMING
THIS TURNED INTO A TIME LOOP STORY WHILE I WAS GONE? I LOVE TIME LOOP STORIES! This fic just keeps getting better and better ...
Dr. Gordon really didn't know what she was creating with her research, though. Wow. It's insane, the ripple effect the past events caused. A few small events when they were kids and it led up to THIS.
And poor Jay ;-; his whole world was turned topsy turvy after Cole's death, and nothing made sense, and it turns out everything's been a lie with him in mind; I'd be that upset too!
I'm melting over Cole's promise to not leave, to stay and help him navigate everything. And the "I love you"s. ;w;

This is probably because I've been rewatching a hell of a ton of She-Ra lately (mostly season 5) but gosh darn it I'm getting so many Catradora vibes again. AHH. Not just that but Harley Quinn vibes too! Like, Jay being "stuck"? Okay. Anyways. Ah.

But "Keep me, huh?" was SO CUUUUUTE. I'm just itching to see Cole go inside Jay's mind. There are SO MANY thoughts as to what could happen.

Wow! I'm back! I'm back. Phew.
It's just been so crazy I needed to take a break.
So... Jay's died BEFORE. YIKES. That's terrifying. But, now I know what kept Cole from actually, totally, dying. Aw... is it corny to call them soulmates? XD

"Dammit, Jay. Why did you come? I can't- I can't keep doing this." IS SO HEARTBREAKING. WHAT.

Zane arrives! And I really hope Nya is ok. Aww, the conversation between Jay and Cole was so sweet, loved it!

Oh SNAP. Reading this after the She-Ra finale gave me major feels dude. The BEFORE moment with young Jay and Cole? MAJOR Catra and Adora vibes... HOLY... I miss them. And! And I'm so invested in that side storyline? What happened! Ah!

But! That's aside the fact that they've got their hands on Cole! YOOOO...