Please keep writing this fan fic

Great chapter!

I really like your story. I think that how they are exploring the other factions together is fun. This story is well developed.

You are doing an amazing job! Don’t worry about the writer block, it’ll go away soon. I love how we get POV from different people and more then just Tobias and Tris

oh no i hope marcus doesn't do anything that makes them regret going to diner.

This chapter was good,it's hard to believe you have writers block! Sorry life sucks, hang in there.

Loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one, if you need anything my PM's are open. Keep up the great work!

I'm sorry you lost the scholarship, I'm sure things will get better soon. love your work

omg wait why can't tris friends not know about the mission and whats going to happen if everyone finds out that tris was "shot" also im sorry for you scholarship but either way this chapter was good!

*plotting

Great chapter! keep up the great work! I wonder what Marcus is plotter

i wonder what is going to happen in abnegation

So, I just read the whole fanfic in one day and I just have to say the was by far one of the best things I've ever read . When I say one of the best things I ever read you have to realize The Fault In Our Stars is apart of that list. You should be a writer! You need to go to someone who recognize your writing and make it a big deal. You have been writing on allot deadline! That's talent! I hope you continue writing! Also you include minor details that bring the story to life! THANK YOU!

i love this chapter! great jib also that must be great that your best friend is actually related to you!

Could you do a fighting scene with four and Eric, pls? Idk why but I just think that would be cool. Ps love your writing! Keep up the good work. And please update! Thanks