Chapters need to be longer no crazy about this Naruto either

Tsunade and shizune Fanservise 100%

This is interesting and like you mentioned in the first A.N. I think it would be cool if Naruto had guys in his harem. I like the idea of him being bi.

Awesome chapter man keep it up to the very end and update again soon as possible thanks.

Always live when Tayuya is good in a story, and definitely did not see naruto getting the curse Mark. Can’t wait to see what happens next

If Tayuya ends up coming with naruto on his journey then does that mean his sister figure will be Tayuya? Since the pairing with naruto is Temari?

Very good so far I like it.
But don't you think that five is a little bit too young for the children to have that kind of dialog? I understand that there is a limit before Gaara turns into an antisocial monster, but maybe seven would be a more appropriate age for them to have to talk the way they did.

Still looking forward for more though.

Era más fácil hacer que Jiraiya que hubiera quedado con Tsunade, pero tu estúpida idea de hacerlas Lesbianas es puro fanservise.

the idea was interesting but why make them lesbians?

Its not like Narutema is rarely done. Hell Narutema is famous crack ship. You can see thousand or hundres thousand of narutema in this site,even AO3 but temari more using in Naruto's harem or having temari cheating on shikamaru with naruto. You can see the famous temari story full with narutema and temari in naruto's harem.I admit i love naruto's harem but sometimes I'm also need narutema fic with single pairing. Glad you made this...Hope to see more...

looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. and can't wait to see how a interaction with Jiraiya will play out given his knowledge of the 4th and whether or not he was told about naruto. As well as how his nature is in regarding his "research" and Tsunade's relationship with Shizune. well anyway keep up the good work.

Wow the review function for this site is really bad. No edit or delete option? I wasn't even done with that yet (and wasn't even 100% committed to posting it in the first place) but misclicking kinda made the choice for me. (and just out of principle and spite towards the UI I'm posting another one rather than having the site tell me I'm stuck with that unfinished and less than optimally articulate review)

Anyway, yeah, normally I'd just ignore the story and move on if it was something like this (since writers are going to write what they want anyway regardless probably). Having the story center around Tsunade and NaruTema are both rarely done things I like to see but I just can't get behind Tsunade/Shizune.

*Searches Tsunade in the hopes that someone actually wrote a story featuring her as the/a main character since like five people have ever done that and they were all one shots or unfinished*

"Awesome! Another Naruto/Temari story! My favorite ship that almost doesn't even exist on the internet!"

"...REALLY? A lesbian pairing? And between

It's your story, write to make yourself happy, not the masses. If you want a Naruto/Temari pairing, cool! I will continue to read it and I am looking forward to seeing how it progresses! Keep up the good work!

A Naruto/Temari is great! Definitely one of my favourite pairings. Keep doing your thing!