Another amazing chapter! I hope Ace will be able to see them as family sooner rather than later.

the fluff! the adorable fluff!
poor Thatch. but yay for Ace and Marco!
stupid celestial dragon. kill him next time Marco!

OH, MY GOD
I thought I wouldn't have the fruit, but super great if you eat it, I really adore your stories.

oh my god Ace. yes. I love you. that's how I saw your first interaction in person with the marines going.

Get better soon and as completely as possible, Ace!

Sweet moments between Ace and Marco were very appreciated, I'm looking forward to seeing that continue and grow. ;)

And those doubters better shut up now! No, seriously. Marco's gonna loose the last verstiges of his patience he had with them and I doubt they'll want to take Ace's place in the infirmary, so they better behave.

Nooo cliffhangers! i hope Ace is okay. and that everyone realizes how good he is afterwards.

Ooooh, mean cliffy is mean!

No worries about not wanting to write out my suggestions. ;) See you next week!

that is so mean!
but so good at the same time.
hopefully Ace will be okay and Marco or someone will do something about Teach
Thatch does know that Teach just tried to kill him right?
I will want as patiently as possible for the next chapter.

Will Shanks is going to be seen a lot more.

Bad Shanks, I know you didn't mean to do that but bad Shanks.
Will this Ace meet this World's Luffy and Sabo?
Could someone or Ace, draw Ace's brothers so he had something about his brothers or something? Like, a picture or a drawn picture or something would be nice. I could be wrong, that could make things worse. maybe they could plant trees or get Ace plants to care for? Didn't he plant trees or something for his brothers after they died? maybe that will help Ace feel a little more at home and help him feel better? maybe?
Maroc and Thatch, and Haruta, need to cheer Ace up. Cheer up Ace! The important people love and like you!
Can't wait to see more. This story is so nice. Your story is so good. I love it. It even inspired me to write something. I saw tha tyou wrote more stories, can't wait to read of your stories. it's so cool.

Poor Ace indeed! D: I hope it gets better soon! As least he's getting closer to Marco and Thatch...

Ok! I've decided! To...! *falter* Well... make impertinent challenges? " Ehehe...
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Lol, anyway, since you're writing with such speed due to the situation, and would probably... hopefully... maybe?... like ideas, I boldly challenge you to write us readers either a One Piece superhero or gangster/mafia AU (or both, I wouldn't be complaining)! :D Same beloved characters, but since your stories with a modern setting are in the vast minority, it could be a bit of a fresh breeze to those mental writing muscles. What do you say? ... (I mean it, honest question, you can absolutely and definitely say no, without any further explanation asked for!)

poor Ace.
Whitebeard better tell Marco so he can go kick them all in the ass. They 11th Division need an butt kicking.
Marco and Whitebeard and Thatch better make Ace feel better. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Poor ace

Super original ! It talks about racism and the fact that humans can be xenophobic. It shows how only few people can tolerate differencies or what is new... I think that a super sad fact about us because we are easily scared and we are somehow selfish and we can't take into consideration other's feeling...
So yeah, this is a really original story and I really hope you can continue it !

us mere humans deserve a bashing. we can be quite horrible. I love the sound of Ace's world.

I wonder if a storm is going to hit them? can see Ace fight Marco or Jozu soon? that would be cool to see. I hope Namur comes over and be friends with Ace soon. they be the blue buddies and Namur could take Ace swimming or something.

next chapter will be interesting. oh, what are going to do about teach? since he's you know, an a-hole and stuff.