Another great chapter!

I read the authors note too quickly and thought you broke your finger from typing this story so quickly. Keep up the good work! These are some small stuff I’ve noticed while binge-reading your story for the past few days: Sometimes when reading I feel like you add some stuff that could be removed. For example Elena and Bonnie answered or said something at the same time, but they said kind of the same thing. You could let only one of them answer to not confuse the reader with 2 answers that are the same. Also when you write the thoughts (for example at the school meetings where Ava is the president), it’s sometimes a lot to read, and I get that it’s supposed to feel overwhelming (and it does). Maybe you could try and see if spacing the thoughts out and including who thought what and then showing how it overwhelmed her. My issue is that when written all together in a paragraph, I usually only glance at them because it doesn’t feel like the incoming thoughts have a real importance. These small problems I have are only nitpicks and overall I enjoy this story a lot! I like that she writes in her diary, it gives the reader a short recap

OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! The flashback is so good before any of the flashbacks I totally thought it was Damon that attacked her and her friends. Her ex is a complete psycho like wtf. While I do love some of her friends the switch up that happened in danger was crazy but expected. Though all the secrets that came out was crazy! I feel so bad for Hanna though I hope we get to find out what happened to her. I love the whole trip with Damon and Elena I was real excited to see what you did with Lexi bf now that she didn’t die and I was not disappointed it was amazing! Keep up the amazing work!

Learning about Ava’s past was interesting and very well written, and Bree supposedly knowing about what she was was mysterious. Another great chapter!

Awesome read! Looking forward to future updates!

Oh my GOD ! This story is an absolute gem, wow. I'm in love really. The Oc Ava is not a stupid damsel in distress, she actually USES her brain, and she's not totally over powered while not being an absolute wimp or dead weight. She's great !
And the way you write things when you switch from future visions to the present, to past visions is actually quite smooth and it did not leave me confused at all.
So great story! Can't wait to read the rest ! Take care !

Absolutely loved it amazing work! KEEP UP THE AWESOME WORK STAY SAFE! :) :)

Honestly I don’t usually favorite stories but this one deserves it. I seriously love Ava’s character and everything about her! I know the next episode is them in Atlanta and I can’t wait to see how that goes

You know, I actually kind of liked Matt and Ava together but I know it’ll be hard for her to be around him because of Vicki. As always, great chapters and I liked that you saved Lexi, although her being dead is kind of a key plot point when the other side business starts coming into play. I’m sure you’ll figure it out. Anyway, keep em coming!

Is it bad that I want this story to be a Stefan/oc/Damon because I don't see a lot of stories that involves a "Stefan/Oc/Damon" only a Damon/Oc and a Stefan/Oc

Loved this chapter, especially how Ava saves Lexi!

Great chapter!

This chapter was so sad, especially when Ava was trying to heal Vicki and it didn’t work. I felt bad enough for Matt as it was during this episode but somehow I feel even worse now that Ava has to dodge him since she’s kind of his only friend right now. So far liking the build up of Damon and Ava’s relationship. Kind of excited to see how it progresses

aw its nice Zach will get to be with his daughter

Please have Damon and Ava be together. I love the slow burn romance type they look like they’re having. Like they both hate each other right now but later on...an epic love story! We need more Damon/OC stories and I love Ava, she’s so unique, caring, selfless and would be prefect for someone like Damon.