Hey C-chan! Great start, keep writing! Remember, you have me to convince about this whole 2x5 thingy! i love the joke. thats just great! and duo's reaction is classic! yay! now that you have the PRIVILEGE to leave high school you better write more and more to keep my sanity up to a reasonable level for the next two years...good luck! jaa ne! ~yui~

oh man i sure hope you get over that writer's block soon! you said this is your first fic? do you mean first fanfic? cuz it sounds like you've been wrtieing for a long time! very good description of the lake and sunrise! the only advice i have to give you is write more! _ keep it up!

wow...that was GREAT! but...YOU GOTTA UPDATE! COME ON MAN! UPDATE!

AW! Fei and Duo! so cutie. Great chappie..

the interaction of the two charas reminded me of some of our convos..and the cherry popsicle line ..only you c-chan, only u! UPDATE!

ps...can I have a cherry popsicle too? 0.0...*pweasies?*

Hey c-chan great start...you make wuffers and spazzy shinigami faw in wuvers!

Oh, great Prologue, can't wait for you to start the story!

Update soon!

Nelia

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It's a promising start. You have a great writting style. Please write more soon!

this could be something... I'd love to read more so please continue