very good and thank you

This was utterly brilliant. please, write more. Pretty please ?

Very good incomplete one-shot.

Awesome one shot. Looking forward to more of this one maybe? Until next time.

Good romp for the fairy tale series of Potter. :)

it was good to see Harry vent about everything that bothered him...
they definitely deserved what they got :)

Interesting. I would have liked it to be longer.

What fun! I'd love to see more.

That was awesome!

This was nice. They totally deserved it.

"They wouldn't see Harry Potter Black for three more years", in which time the Now Lord Potter had Graduated from Salem's Witches Academy (or Ilvermorny, take your pick) with Honours, along with Masteries in DADA, Potions, and Charms (still working on the Transfiguration, but almost done). With him came Lord Longbottom (with His Masteries in Herbology, AND Potions), as well as Lady Dagworth-Granger Potter (with Her Masteries of Transfiguration, Charms, Runes, Arithmancy, and Spell Creation, and Lady Lovegood, soon to be Lady Longbottom Lovegood (with her Masteries of CoMC, Magizoology, and Fairy Magic), with her favorite Snorkack Puddles.

That was Fun. Thank You. TTFN

Finally, someone who saw the many and varied shortcomings of this supposedly venerable head of house. Family, pooh, more like fighting inmates.

I'll wait with my comments until the story is more than a plot bunny. Nice beginning though.

thanks for a very enjoyable rant and correction.
No sane person can read books 6 and 7 and have respect for any of the staff aside from Hagrid, who is obviously brain damaged.

Magnificent! All stories should be like this one. Well done!