Awe poor Jed! I had a feeling it wouldn't be that easy. Who could this mysterious mermaid be? And what's her reason for transforming all those people into merpeople? Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh I like Nathan haha He's not much for the melodrama! And Nadina sounds very pretty, I'm curious to learn more about her. Is she the reason that Jed was transformed into a merman? Also can't wait to see how Triton reacts to his story!

Awww it was so sweet to see Jed playing with his nieces and nephew on the beach, and yesssss Liliana made a move! I like when the ladies have a chance to initiate things. Very curious to see what happens with this mysterious mermaid now!

I. NEED. MORE! Fan fictions like these are the only things keeping me through quarantine.

Oh boy, Jed is going to have a rough go of it, I can already tell! Not his fault that the princess is attracted to himAlso, classic "Do as I say, not as I do" coming from Jim, considering he pursued a royal 20 years ago and it all worked out lol Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! Totally understand how hectic moving can bewe just moved a couple of months ago and are still unpackingbut glad to see you're still updating! Stay safe and healthy!

Finally had some time to sit down and read the first chapter! Great beginning! It's so nice to see Silver as a father and still working as an instructor at the academy. Wow! 5 kids! Curious to see how becoming parents have changed Jim and Ariel. Also curious to see what happens between Jed and Lilliana!

OMG I've only read the synopsis so far, but I just wanted to say how excited I am about a sequel!