Reviews for Living a Lie
Tracy Evans chapter 14 . 7/24
First, I think you meant to say that Reid and the SWAT agents were thrown to the ground, not the grown. Lol!
I, too had an inspiration from the series finale on an alternate way the team had stopped Everett Lynch and blew up the jet mainly involving JJ and Reid. If you want to read it, look up the Jeid story "Rewrite the Stars" by WritingHealsTheHeart, go to "reviews" and look at my review on Chapter 34. I told the author in detail how I thought finally stopping Lynch would have made JJ and Reid grow closer in that story.
In your story, once again, something bad happened after Reid and JJ had split up! Reid was definitely blaming himself for the death of those SWAT agents. Just like Gideon would have if he was there. JJ and the rest of the team need to convince Reid that this explosion wasn't his fault. It was Lynch's fault. And, after that explosion, I think both JJ and Reid need a EMT to look at them.
Keep on writing this story!
ciTo44 chapter 14 . 7/24
Not going to lie, this was kind of short and underwhelming for the wait, but I don't mind. These are stressful times and I don't know what all you are dealing with so, thanks for the update:) I'm loving this fic so far and hope you don't give up on it, take a break if you need to, just come back. There aren't many of these out there so yeah:) Hope everything works out for you3
Tracy Evans chapter 13 . 7/11
I'm not sure I could get used to JJ calling Hotch "Aaron" on a regular basis. The whole series, she's only called him "Aaron" once. After Will was shot by the surviving bank robber brother in Season 7's "Hit."
But, it was nice seeing Hotch and Jack again. I wondered after Season 13's premiere "Wheels Up," when Rossi and Prentiss told the team that Hotch chose not to return to the BAU, would he and Jack have returned to New York to find Beth and reconnect with her or to go and check on Sean Hotchner.
Hotch was right. Reid being mad at JJ for helping Hotch fake Prentiss's death was the only other time JJ was out of sync with Reid.
I think JJ should have added that Reid had killed the "truth or dare" unsub by following in Hotch's footsteps by having an ankle gun. Hearing that, Hotch definitely would have been proud of Reid.
I also think that Hotch should have asked JJ did she secretly feel jealous of Lila kissing Reid in that pool, or when Reid was secretly phoning Maeve or when Reid had received the card with a lipstick kiss on the back of it from the beautiful bartender, Austin. If JJ answered "Yes" to those three times, then she might have been encouraged to take the risk of seeing her Spence before another woman like Max walks into his life. Lol!
Keep on writing this story!
SaintXHollow18 chapter 13 . 7/10
I haven't watched CM since the end of season 13. I just happened to see some vids on youtube and OMG I missed so many Jencer moments. After watching the jj and Reid confession video I immediately came to look for fanfiction of these two and I find your story. Its amazing and makes me wish even more that Jencer was end game
lalez chapter 2 . 7/9
:(
This was kind of harsh and petty of Will (and somehow my head is not willing to compute that fact).
I am quite fond of that relationship too... yeah, I am weird I guess.
lalez chapter 1 . 7/9
Hey,
see I found some time already ;)
I was freaking out after that scene... I couldn't believe that had happened. And I wanted to know what how why and absolutely everything.
So you have me on the hook already.
In this set-up, I especially love the last paragraph and Reid thinking about all that missed time together due to circumstances.
stars90 chapter 13 . 7/8
I love Hotch encouraging JJ to go for it. I know that would mean a lot to Reid if he found out!
Nursebonbon chapter 13 . 7/7
Aww what a nice chapter. The dynamic between JJ and Hotch is so sweet and caring. He seemed to really help JJ by getting her to open up about her feelings and concerns.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/5
Please keep going! I really enjoy reading this story :)
Hihihi chapter 12 . 7/2
Hi, I really like this story! Hope you continue it!
smallville83 chapter 12 . 7/3
I'm very interested in this story I like it keep up the good work.
stars90 chapter 12 . 7/3
I'm definitely still enjoying this, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you advance things between JJ and Spence
Bohogal1998 chapter 12 . 7/2
Please continue! Don't just leave it!
LuniBell chapter 12 . 7/2
Lovely ffiction. Dont give up. Please. Loking for a NEW chapter, very soon. JEID FOREVER
Nursebonbon chapter 12 . 7/2
I love this story! Don't you dare give up on it or I'll hunt you down, lol!
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