Great fic. I love it. Well done.

I always imagined Donna would have one day found a way to forgive Bill, if only for Hank's sake. Hank struck me as a very gentle soul who would have insisted on it. I don't think he could have stayed married to her with that kind of darkness in her soul. Just really sucks what happened in the series finale. Sorry for the rambling. I enjoyed this because Donna was such an under-used character and I would have liked to see more of her in the series.

Oooh what a chap.I love it. Well done.

Wordy was such a great character. He was one of my favourites until he was written out with Parkinson’s, so this chapter is a real treat. It’s great because of how important “Clean Hands” was for the character and all it meant. I can imagine he really would be tormented like this if it ever came to taking someone’s life with his own hands. Well done.

Poor Wordy. Yeah he would TOTALLY have a hard time with this. Keep it up.

Awesome job. I liked Marina in the canon series but I can see how it may not have worked with magical Flashpoint. I like how you're adding her now and can't WAIT to see which way this will go.

I like it. Well done.