I just finished reading this story and I absolutely loved it and want more. I absolutely want to see Percy and Thalia's adventure in the shadow realm and see what happens next for them. Seriously hope you do a sequel.

Look. You made a huge misstep in writing the story. Actually, only three plot issues but they were partially major.

1. First of all, Thalia is not more powerful than Percy because she was trained under Artemis’ blessing, and didn’t train her powers as much as Percy. You should have flipped it so that Thalia was in Percy’s place and have Zeus kill Sally because you can’t make her betray him. So, that whole thing was an issue.

2. Then there was Percy’s fatal flaw. He wouldn’t have stayed with Thalia for so long after she was ready to kill him to get what she wanted. He would have left her to die after that. He would hate her for all she did to his family and would go against her. His bond with Thalia doesn’t run so deep after what she did that he would give up the world for her.

3. This is kinda minor, but Riptide was way more powerful than Aegis. If you forget, ανακλυσμος was imbued with the immortal essence of Zoe Nightshade. Aegis was just a copy of the original which Zeus gave her, not straight from Athena. Riptide was Zoe’s sword and had her immortality in it. So, it should have been Aegis that shattered and Riptide that got the crack.

Personally, I just think that you made Thalia too powerful. She’s not that strong w/out Artemis’ blessing

Please WRITE A SEQUEL!
U made the relationship between thalia and Percy so good and it was one of the best toa aus I’ve ever read.
Ok i didn’t read a lot of them because the seven etc more or less all die and rick used a fat wannabe god instead as main character but u really reduced that •.•
Also I wouldn’t have a problem if u would make some perlia.

Not necessary bUt I would really like it.
Anyways
UUUUUUUUPPPPPPDDDDDDAAAAAATTTTTEEEEEE!
Pls?
Thanks
Bye
Thatpersonwithasentenceasname

Listen u kelphead, if u don't write this and post before this Sunday, then u r as good as those Greek Gods(especially like Hera who doesn't likes certain demigods), that was cussing okay!

Now I am pleading at the same time...Please post the next Chapter_I really want the next Chapter to be posted

And also I thin sincere guy since u haven't written ur own comments much in any of the chapter and i can only guess that u r more mature than a Middle school's brain

So open up ur brain, ask for help if u want even from me and please post the story else give it for adoption...There are a lot of die heart fans for this fanfiction...

And yeah we all love u

Please!

Bye!

Please complete this one...it's gong sooo welll...Please I really like ur story

I loved this story! Will it have a sequel?

Please update the next chapter

Hey please continue this story...You can do it...I am ur die heart fan

I stayed up all night reading this story. I loved it and would love to see a sequel to this story if you are able to.

daaaamn... please fūçkin write another story about Percy and Thalia in the shadow realm thing. this story was so damn amazing

YES! For the love of all things holy, yes make a sequel!

Amazing, simply amazing. From characterization to just the flow of your sentences. Not only you coped the topic of death and loss so well. I couldn't stop reading. This probably one of, if not the best written fan-fiction, for the lack of a better word, that i have found on this site, simply amazing keep up the good. If you make any more in the future I'll look forward it. Till than take care.

I’d be down to read a sequel.

Love the story and loved the fact you updated regularly.
Very original idea
Hopefully we can see a sequel in the near future?
Thanks for letting me read your work and thanks for putting in time for us.

Yes please write a sequel to this! This story definitely showcased the best character development (for both, but especially Thalia) that I've read here. Both of them were written extremely well but Percy's POV was perfect! I'm normally not a fan of dark/tragic stories but your writing made everything seem justified. I really hope you continue this story!