| Reviews for Rondo in the Endless Sky |
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   Eric Michael Kline chapter 14 . 7/25 Nothing I can comment here besides a few grammatical errors. But that was more my fault than yours. I was kind of distracted during my beta reading this chapter so I fear my work quality may have suffered. |
| myzor king of war chapter 14 . 7/25 So is he going to have sex with Rosalie and Chris? Leave it to Hilda to cause so much trouble. Loved how Alain made a come back with her crap nice to see the others warming up to each other |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/10 Cute That Alain Finds Salia Cute In Her Holy Knight Pretty Lilian Outfit. |
| Shadow Solaris chapter 13 . 7/11 A great chapter with the transitions between events and showing the different povs of the characters. Looking up for the next one. |
| myzor king of war chapter 13 . 7/9 he should have blocked the punch |
| Eric Michael Kline chapter 13 . 7/9 So how do they get mail if Arzenal is completely cut off? Also I kind of wonder if Vivian is THAT innocent. I mean, she knows about Dalia's secret stash and she does give Tusk a thumbs up in the DRAGONs Earth. |
| wolfpackrwby88 chapter 2 . 7/9 And you used all those callsigns too... Oh, & FYI its "Galm", not garm... I've looked it up more than once... |
| wolfpackrwby88 chapter 1 . 7/9 Really? You essentially just plagiarized Ace Combat Zero's opening... |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/5 I'm Curious What The Names Of Alain's Parents Will Be But For Now. Me Like. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/2 The Way Erich Dission Looked Like The Way You Describe Him Make Thinks He Should Have Richard Epcar As The Voice For Big Boss That Would Be Something. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/29 Don't forget to upload the twin star exorcist |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/28 The 'More Than You Know.' Is So True. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/27 Fine Work Also The Last Parts With The Place Far Far Away From Arzenal Gets Me Curious And I Like It. |
| Guest DCDGojira chapter 12 . 6/26 To author Awesome chapter! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/26 Oh Nice. |
