Very good plot. I like the story so far. But you have many grammatical mistakes. Maybe you should have a beta to help you

Interesting getup here but I was hoping for some action. I see you have the set up, the antagonist, a list of protagonists, and half a plot. The rest should flow in perfect order if the antagonists don't wisen up.. please update soon.

great chapter update soon

Veeeery very interesting... XD And to think, had Harry not found that book and figured things out and made those letters for the duo, they'd have been freaking out when they got to the ministry. Looking forward to seeing just what is going to happen next!