Reviews for A love in time
Chrysanthemum9484 chapter 7 . 10/13
I don't think they had reached the exams... but it's your FF so you are free to do whatever you wish.
forestreject chapter 7 . 10/12
:hearts:
luffya139 chapter 7 . 10/12
Need more from your story I LOVE IT SO MUCH keep like that you a great writer :)
Titania1796 chapter 7 . 10/10
me alegro que al fin hayas actualizado aunque no entendí mucho sobre lo que paso en los exámenes chunnin así que ahora Tobirama buscara información de los bijuus y los jinchuriki
Lone-Wolf-Ranger chapter 7 . 10/10
I really love this! You’ve done such a good job making an interesting and cute Fanfiction!
TheBeauty chapter 7 . 10/10
Nice chapter :) I wonder when will Tobirama figure out that Naruto is from future.
kksambo chapter 7 . 10/10
Love this! Thought I confess, I am very sad Sasuke and Fem!Naruto don’t have the same bond, but am not surprised. Sasuke struck me as probably being a sexist, so it makes sense he wouldn’t take the female version of Naruto seriously at all. As far as Sakura, it also makes sense that she’d be more hostile towards fem!Naruto, probably seeing her as direct competition for Sasuke’s “affections”, since again, Naruto is a girl here. Also, F Sakura. Both in canon and especially in this story. Loathe her ass. Phew. With that being said lol, I appreciate Naruto’s more realistic personality. Dark, cynical, and very angry, almost hateful behind closed doors, it makes a lot more sense. I adore her bonds with Itachi, Shikamaru, Choji, Ino, the Hokage, and of course Kakashi, who you did right by here! I hope they ALL remain by her side. Especially since she really doesn’t have anyone else. Stupid Sasuke. With his head up his own ass as usual, he doesn’t know what he’s missing out on. Oh, well. Guess Naruto is better off without him dragging her down anyway. Last but not least, I adore her friendship with Tobirama, and can’t wait for it to develop into a full blown relationship! I look forward to learning how that would work out, being that he’s supposed to be long dead...
ThwylaStellar chapter 7 . 10/10
Omg! An update yeeees! Also a jealous Tobi, can't wait for them to meet! Wait please let Tobirama connect the dots when he sees Hiruzen after Orochimaru Edo Tensai'd him and Hashi.
ehanda chapter 7 . 10/10
TTTT I loved this chapter. It’s been awhile so I’ll have to reread from the beginning!
Blu3b3rryT3a chapter 6 . 10/5
Well then.
Things are getting interesting~!
This is a good story, I really am enjoying it.
Naruto is gonna have an odd talk with Hashirama, isn't she?
I like how she is more attached to Itachi than Sasuke- and she is totally justified in being pissed with Sakura and Sasuke, the morons.
Until next time, best of luck and stay safe!
Guest chapter 6 . 8/5
How can he see her now? What changed? That’s going to be interesting. And I hope somehow, Tobi and Naruto can truly be together. Otherwise it’d just sad lol
ThwylaStellar chapter 6 . 7/19
pleeease update soon! also didn't the Nidaime and Shodaime got 'rived' in the Chunin exams? Would Tobirama remember Hiruzen as Naruto's ji-chama? Can't wait till they meet in the Fourth Shinobi War.

I can already imagine Naru calling Tobirama "Tobi-chama"
forestreject chapter 6 . 7/19
:hearts: Rest when you can.
csad21 chapter 6 . 7/5
Hmm... This story didn't turn out to be what I hoped and expected (because I kinda overlooked the "romance" tag), but it's still a lovely story that I hope you find the time and motivation to continue.

The "new gods/old gods thing seem like it'll be a plot arc at some point, and the whole being bound to Kurama's soul regardless of time and place thing is also very interesting.

But right now, I kinda wish you'd given us glimpses into some of the in-between time. Like, how did Team 7 come to be and what did Naruto mean when she said they hid things from her in the exams?

On the other hand, it seems like you're rushing cabon because you want to get to the real plot soon, and that in turn makes me wonder what that real plot is.

In any case, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)
csad21 chapter 1 . 7/5
This looks like an interesting story.

I have not yet read the rest of the chapters posted, but I had to say this:

[ Hiruzen looked over the young girl in the hospital bed, connected to lines and oxygen. Fury burned deep within him as he touched her hand gently, "Find them. Hunt them down. I want every last one of them. Send them to Ibiki. I want them broken. Inu, Weasel, Neko, Kinoe, hunt them as freely as you'd like. You have my permission." he ordered quietly, yet the weight of his demand was enough to fill the room as the ANBU disappeared. ]

[ The village had gone too far this time and he had enough. From now on, Hiruzen promised to train Naruto and if anyone on his council had a problem then they would have to take it up with him – he would reject any negativity and make sure his little blonde knew how to protect herself. ]

Usually "mob beating" trope is enough for me to turn away from a story. But these above quoted two paragraphs have my attention like you wouldn't believe!

A Hiruzen who stops being a little bitch qnd actually starts acting like the powerful top boss he's supposed to be? Whoa! Sign me right up! :DDD
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