actually anubis isnt a wolf or dog though, he is a jackal

is longbottom using harry's invisibility cloak? also all they have to do is just do a waltz with another champion, there is nothing that says harry can't switch back and forth with fleur and tonks, same with fleur or tonks dancing with each other. and they judges wouldn't care, because in their eyes, the champions knew the potential dangers of the tournament

i thought the metamorphagus was a black family thing?

You might want to put a tad more thought into the smaller details in your story. Putting aside the whole slaughtering of the Durstrang contingent, there’s a lot of small things here and there that you toss out without seemingly thinking into the deeper meaning of things. For example, you casually have Neville hiding underneath an invisibility cloak... and there’s been no mention of the invisibility cloak that is a potter heirloom. A reader can easily believe this means Neville has the Potter cloak.

And you really do need someone to help you with your spelling in the story. There’s a lot of misspelled words present, well, everywhere. It’s not to the point that your story is unreadable, but there’s a few times I had to stop and find the similar word that’d make your sentence actually make sense.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Great Chap, keep up the awesome job Great Chap, keep up the awesome job

I thoroughly got a laugh one the trios prank and the one with the judges being pranked later too; I am eagerly awaiting next chapter

please update soon I love this story.

The name of the style of moustache is a fu manchu i believe

Nice piece! I'm really enjoying it!

Ugh that was painful, please get a beta reader or re read each chapter that you post. Most words are not that bad to read if a letter is off, but there are several that need to be fixed because it is the wrong version or word entirely. One example being "... while his brother regained his composer." Correct word is 'composure'.

While I'm loving this story, you have quite the annoying habit when it comes to spell-checking: You tend to write Charles & Dora instead of Charlus & Dorera, you've spelled Fleur as Fluer, Flure and God knows what else, you spelled Werewolf as 'Warewolf' (I found that one funny, though) and you even wrote Gabriel instead of Gabrielle. I'll overlook the Moisture Potter mainly because its spell-checking corrects foreign languages. Like I said, I LOVE the story, but you should take a second look or so-or at least get a beta.
-SS V-King, Over & Out

Dying to know what prank the 3 plan on pulling

Nasty things Wedigos are but I must say you did an excellent job with this chapter and I am eagerly anticipating the next one

Great job and what do you think about using knuckleeve from Irish and Celtics myth?

Happy birthday