Reviews for A Vigilante, Detective, and future Pro Hero
RokuNi chapter 8 . 5/26
PLEASE DO IT AS A FELLOW YAOI SHIPPER OR AS A FUDANSHI AND IM ALREADY DOING THE DOGEZA POSE
RokuNi chapter 9 . 5/26
And could you just PLEASE MAKE SHOTO AND SHINSOU INLOVE WITH IZUKU PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE AND DONT YOU DARE SHIP HIM WITH GODDAMN BITCHASS BAKUHOE
RokuNi chapter 9 . 5/26
nahh its ok
RokuNi chapter 8 . 5/26
well i know aizawa isnt a pro but a teacher so i can think of only him so the scenario i had in my mind are the following:

1. Aizawa is stressed out about the students because they are a bit of a ruckus and izuku sees aizawa being stressed abd just make him feel comfortable and good and like talk about what they experienced being bullied and eventually aizawa becomes comfortable around izukuand decides to have a make over! shave cut off some off his hair and make him look handsome you can decide if you dont wanna do this part! and he falls for Viridi btw

I actually well think about detective tsukauchi having a crush on detective izuku and well has a crush to him too

and SHINSOU PLEASE MAKE HIM A BOI OF IZUKU AND DO IT LIKE THE SCENARIO OF AIZAWA PLEASEEEEEE
InfinityMask chapter 8 . 5/11
Nice chapter . Despite not fans of yaoi I can see Hawk infatuation as a believable situation. I wonder what Bakugou reaction to Izuku being in UA? Did he remember Izuku? What his parents reaction when it was known Bakugou is bully?
InfinityMask chapter 5 . 5/11
Ikr! I always disturbed how little is done to bakugo! I mean he act more villain than some villain!
InfinityMask chapter 3 . 5/11
Well damn. Those higher up and Endeavour must hate Izuku. I wonder what they would do if they know his identity?
InfinityMask chapter 2 . 5/11
I hope he wouldn’t get OFA than. If he get that it would destroy his message
InfinityMask chapter 1 . 5/11
What about X men? Are they in this story too? Btw I kinda think Vivian is female... I’m always categorized that name as feminine name.. haha
neraalw chapter 8 . 4/25
-Maybe you could make a situation where Midoriya is needed both as his Vigilante self and his personal self.

-You could have one of the pro heroes (or a certain child *cough* Eri *Cough*Cough*) figure out Viridi's identity. Of course he would know that they were either stalking him or following him somewhere. This could be any hero that you deem fit to be in that situation. And maybe Viridi also blackmails them to keep his identity a secret, like him knowing that they have a crush on him or them doing something that is really embarrassing that they don't want the public to know.

-Maybe you could have a small (or big) scene of Viridi and Tsukauchi talking to each other about the recent closings of schools or businesses.

-This is about Bakugou, but could you make it that Viridi helps him by telling him to get hearing aids and glasses along with him somehow getting therapy about his anger issues (to an extent, so that he isn't throwing curse word after curse word) cus due to the amount of explosions he makes in his life it is bound to make lasting effects on his eyesight and hearing. With the amount of explosions he makes, it is bound to make him half deaf with in turn can explain why he yells all the time. By the way I can understand that you just want Bakugou to stay the way he is as the anime portrays him to be.

-This is really unrelated, but could you make some fluff between Viridi and Hawks. Saying this to a fellow Fujoshi.

Anyways that's all the ideas I have for now lol. Btw I know how it feels to be in a writers block cus I am in one now and it is not pretty. Anyways keep up the great work! I really do like these kind of stories, except for the ones that makes no sense.
RedOrca chapter 8 . 4/2
if you need a base I can give you advice on some. For Tsukauchi they would be professional while also having an air of familiarity with how their work would line up with one another. While Aizawa would have a friendly attitude with them having similar tactics in approach. Nemuri and Hizashi would be friendly but Izuku would have problems with the personality clash. That is as much as I can help you for now
ProjectIceman chapter 8 . 4/1
AHH. Sweet, sweet justice! XD
ProjectIceman chapter 2 . 4/1
Nice NGNL reference! *THUMBS UP*
ProjectIceman chapter 1 . 4/1
I'm pretty sure that the 20% Quirkless thing is based on the world population.
D3lph0xL0v3r chapter 8 . 3/31
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!

PLEASE HAVE IZUKU PRIMARY HAVE A GIRLFRIEND!
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